wow this is amazing! and it's funny and barely like the other fan fiction. which is a compliment because martin and Chris would like it because you wrote them NOT liking Aviva and Koki which is pretty inappropriate. you actually put in Laura, martin's real world wife in there which I think is genius. you are also a very good writer! keep on going with those funny childhood stories!

young Jimmy:* sees Martin get kissed on the cheek*" COOTIES!" *runs for the door
Jimmy:*sees Martin and Kitty kissing on ze lips shrugs and walks off*
THIS IS ANOTHER AWESOME STORY YOU'VE AMAZED AND INSPIRED ME AGAIN SILVA!

Oh god that was to cute! I honestly want to see more of these guys later!

That was a cute ending! Make a sequel!

It was good

Make one of these for every holiday. Christmas, thanksgiving, Halloween, 4th of July, Easter, New year's, everything! Please do it silver! Please?

i love it! but i think, you should make another chapter or something.

Sweet

Awesome but what happened to Chris

Good job

Good story! Would've like a little more Caviva in there though... but it's a well-written story nonetheless!

cute!

zach kinda looks like a kappa from a book i finished reading called tigers curse

martin is kind fat

(giggles) sort of...