Reviews for Serpentine ?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6
I found this story 6 years ago and read it in one hit, been looking forward to reading more ever since. I hate it when people leave good stories unfinished. Please update soon
nancy chapter 4 . 9/26/2019
Its been seven years since you last did anything with this story. I am sure that a lot of people would enjoy reading another chapter or two if you would try to update the story as you said you would.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2018
Thank you for the sexing and detailed story. Hope you have a nice day.
loverofhell chapter 4 . 1/2/2018
This chapter was great to read cant wait to read more chapters of this story ... what will happen next for them
loverofhell chapter 3 . 1/2/2018
I really do love reading this story ... and i think yout are a really good writer ... i would you to finish of this story of yours so please write more chapters and i cant wait to see what happens for yami and atemu
LadyZoi chapter 4 . 1/30/2017
I love this story! Can you please update it?
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 4 . 10/13/2016
It’s so sad what happened to Atemu and Yami's kids. I’m glad one is still alive. I love the pairing Atemu/Yami! They are so cute and adorable together! I love male pregnancy stories! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it.
Raven325 chapter 4 . 4/21/2016
Please update soon
Howl3 chapter 4 . 7/2/2015
This is the best naga story i have ever read. I felt like I was watching a special on nagas on animal planet because the story is so well narrated and the animal instinct vivid and easy to imagine. I'm very curious on what others like Atem's friends and family think about the whole situation. Are you still writing the story? I hope so as it is pretty awesome.
Pharaoh Ceasa chapter 4 . 6/21/2015
Please update !
klagana1 chapter 4 . 11/30/2014
I like this so far. Keep going with it.
Yaoi-lover-anime-lover chapter 4 . 9/5/2014
This is a good story and i would like to read more please update soon
Kimpatsu no Hoseki chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
Please come back and update!
yugifan15 chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
This is really good. I hope you still have ideas. (Though its been mabey 3 years now)
Kgirl113 chapter 4 . 8/8/2013
Hey r u going to update soon! This is an awesome story! I loved the idea that yugi is atem and yamis son, I don't know why more people don't do that it makes a lot more sense than people oc s!
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