| Reviews for Double |
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Ataahua chapter 1 . 7/15/2017 Hahahahahaa. This was too funny. Why do I get the feeling that L was a bit jealous? Or maybe not, but I wouldn't put it past him. I can't blame Erin for getting all flustered by a celebrity talking to her and calling her pretty etc. I'd be the same. XD |
CuteVyper chapter 1 . 6/26/2016 I know it's impossible to say this but... I think someone is jealous xD |
keileenobiginiyoina chapter 1 . 6/7/2014 This was mentioned in one of the chapters of And the story continues! I didn't know that it has a chapter of its own! Maybe I should explore every great authors' profile to find mooooore stories. Haha! I love this! Now i need to read that laundry thingy. Haha |
Andrahz chapter 1 . 10/27/2013 omg xD It's like, 2:30 in my country and I was reading this, then started to manically laugh and my parents woke up xD God, it's soso funny! |
RandomCitizen chapter 1 . 1/16/2013 He was so jelly :P |
LunaFisto chapter 1 . 8/11/2012 XD Very cute and Very funny. But this is so weird...How come you have like 590 reviews for SOTC, but then only 10 for your one shots. That sort'ove bits man. Loyal readers they are,,,,,no judging. Well, actually I AM judgeing but like...if I was a writer i would be sort'ove peeved. Oh well, ;D There missin out! I'm turning in for bed! See you tommaro! ...maybe, heh. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2012 I seriously couldn't stop laughing the entire time. XD I love this take on that one filming set with Misa and Ryuga, heh-heh. And of course, L doesn't really want to call himself jealous. But I'd be pretty jealous too if a cleaned-up version of me gave my girl (er, boy, I guess in my case XD) a note "with a kiss." (watches on as L give Hideki Ryuga a kick) o_o |
cruorem chapter 1 . 4/26/2012 lol |
Kuro Kuro Kyuurain chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 I love this story so much...! also, I think SOTC is the best L/OC story I've ever read. L is absolutely not OOC. and Elin, she's just amazing character. I mean she's definitely not MarySue and some crap like that. the romances between those two are so sweet and believable... please make another L/Elin story. I always love the way you make them together.. keep up the good work! :) |
xFillyStarx chapter 1 . 4/15/2012 I thought for sure Hideki was going to kiss her. I wasn't quite sure whether to have a giggling fit or headdesk myself or what, but either way that was awesome. XD And of course L has to be an arse again. Big surprise (Or is it jealousy?). _ Light got a noogie! XD About time too. |
deactivated10-16 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012 Oh L, L- I like you, but man, you're such an asshole. Was that really necessary? I loved Misa in this, by the way. I feel like she gets way too much unnecessary bashing, and I like that you keep her over-the-top bubbliness without making her seem too much like an airhead. And I like seeing Erin in the third person too. Very fun read! |
sincethelastday chapter 1 . 4/2/2012 Hey! This was really cute! I love the part where Erin gets all flustered when Hideki Ryuga starts to talk to her. And is that jealousy I see from L when he purposely lets the autograph drift away in the wind? Thanks for the little plug-in as well. The only thing, and it's small, is that my story is called "Please No Flash Photography" instead of "No Flash Photography, Please." Don't worry about it though; I'm happy that you got an idea just from one of my chapters. ) Very cute! |