So, this story was awesome. I mean, I am so blown away. Granted I am incredibly depressed now but that just speaks to your talent as a writer to be able to capture the reader so entirely in your story. Honestly, this was brilliant and I really don't give my praise out easily. So...keep up the good work! You owe it to yourself and your fans!

This story made me CRY! And that NEVER HAPPENS!
In other words, this was absolutely fantastic!

this is so sad, and romantic

he fakeed his own death.

sad story, to redeem this sad story why dont u write a fic where they have a kid?

Overall, this was very well written. Considering that I usually don't like angst and tragedy, that says alot. :)

If you want ideas, I agree with the other reviewer. There aren't a lot of fics that take place after the manga ended. The manga basically left the door open for a possible romance with them but never outright stated it.

ummmmm how bout a yoshitoki fic set after yoshi seals karasumori? if you have read the manga they never really got together...

THIS WAS SO SAD! i cant stop crying! but i loved it if you could make another yoshitoki fic (without the tragedy part) that would be awsome cuz you are a great writer!