Reviews for You Had Two Sisters Once
DobbyLovesSocks chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Hi. I'm stuck in the car and have nothing to do, so I'm stalking your fics.

As always, I really liked this. I love how you portrayed not only Andromeda, but also Ted. Your descriptions of Bellatrix were perfectly /her/ and the end made me smile and frown and it was all so well done.
words-with-dragons chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
I love the Black sisters, they've become my new obsession! They're so fascination; the mad one, the traitor, the good one. I just wish I could write them. Sadly, I just can't get any inspiration. Luckily, you write them so well! :D
AnUnholyAmountOfPasta chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
'You met him in hidden classrooms because his blood was fresher, newer than yours.' - favourite line! It's an interesting way to phrase it.

I liked the scene with her destroying everything because it's implied in canon that Andromeda's a bit of a clean freak, so it shows her breaking down. Maybe that's just me over thinking things :P

I liked how Narcissa changed and helped her heal a little.
Bella J. Kate chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
AH-MAZING! So well-written! Really great.
TamariChan chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
You are so beautiful. This is so beautiful. Just- ugh- wow- I-

"There, you whispered burning confessions as if he were a priest. There was nothing holy or sacred about the way he kissed you though, or the words that tripped from his tongue when he asked you to escape with him, or the way his fingers knew the map of your body better than your own eyes." This- this- especially 'when he asked you to escape with him'- is stunning. This is why I read fanfiction- this is why I read, period.

This is why I write, so I can someday write someday this beautiful.
QOP chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Oh, this short fic brought tears in my eyes: so beautifuly writen , and so sad
et-tu-lj chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
"You met him in hidden classrooms because his blood was fresher, newer than yours."

I love this. She knows her world doesn't approve and hides it instinctively, but even in her own head she doesn't think of him as lesser. Works great for Andromeda.

You've made Andromeda feel so free and joyful, even from the earliest memory. It casts everything she did as a decision to choose life, instead of as a rebellion against what she was raised with (as Sirius' choices seem to be). The distinction makes me love her even more.

And god. I never thought about what it would mean to Andromeda, to find out that it was Bella that killed Tonks. Putting it in her POV makes the betrayal hurt so much more.

So glad that she reunited with Narcissa. They will both have such wounds from the war, and it is a balm to have found each other again. I love this piece, and that it ends with healing, even as Bellatrix cannot be healed.
Droobles.is.a.funny.word chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
This is a beautiful story I never thought about cissy and andromeda back getting together