I'm really impressed with this final chapter.
It seems to me that your writing has improved greatly when comparing this to your earlier efforts. Or maybe it's me that changed. Either way this was delightful. Always good to end strong right?
I wish you continued success with your future projects - whatever they may be.

This particular little fic inspired some polarized emotions though I will do my best to present an objective impression of what I think.

I despise Yui/Azusa but I will admit that the first chapter was still well written. To be honest I would have thought that Azusa would have protested more before caving into Yui's ministrations. I just don't see Azusa letting herself get seduced so easily. While the lemon was good I just thought that set up leading to the lemon did not make much sense. Overall probably the weakest chapter of the three.

Chapter 2 is leagues above the first chapter. I'm not the biggest Mitsu fan but you certainly made me understand why people love this pairing. The way you write both Mio and Ritsu felt so natural. You take a few of creative liberties with their characters and yet still remain so true to their canon selves. I have read many Mitsu stories out there and I can say that your chapter alone is probably in the top 5, easily one of the best. I especially love Mio's indignation towards Ritsu and how Ritsu so expertly, so easily was able to bypass Mio's defenses. In just one chapter you show just how intimate these two characters are and not just in the physical sense either. Definitely the best chapter of the three.

That being said I also loved chapter 3. I don't think I have ever read an Ui/Mugi pairing before but I can see the two of them in the kitchen with Ui teaching Mugi how to bake all those delicious treats. Speaking of which you totally should have had them do it in the kitchen. You write Mugi's thoughts and have say that she doesn't want to come off "spontaneous" and yet had you wrote a passionate lemon in the kitchen it would have been a funny contradiction to Mugi's initial thoughts. You could have even ended it with Mugi's thoughts being "So much for being subtle." The kitchen would have been a great place. Despite that this chapter wasn't as deep or serious as the second but was light hearted and fun, a good chapter to cheer up the readers.

With that out of the way I wonder as to why you are leaving fanfiction? It's good to acknowledge that you aren't the best writer (I certainly am not lol) but that doesn't mean you have to stop writing. You can always still post one-shots here and there, not all fanfiction entries have to be epic Lord of the Rings style stories. Your Mitsu and Mugi/Ui are really good and I would love to see you write more of them even if they are one shots.

However it's your choice and if you have other priorities then I understand. I wish you luck on those endeavors then :D

Hur hur. So I see you're FINALLY back to complete this huh. A nice surprise to see an email notif on this fic in the morning when I wake up. I gotta buck up and do something about my K-ON fics now that you've conpleted yours : not cool, M-san, not cool.

I'll like to think that you know who the heck I am too. Considering you're the one who gave me this bastard nickname... You should know.

Either way, I like the build up but the actual scene is... So short. I thought they were just about to start then... Ui came. D: that's not a very exciting first time, Mugi. Either that or dear little Hirasawa is too sensitive, or M-san here just lost the motivation. *ahem*.

Thanks for bringing me back to the K-ON fandom though, since I've been through 3 other fandoms after moving on from K-ON. Real nostalgia here.

I was honored to beta the first two chapters of this story, and would have been similarly honored to do the same with this chapter. But even if I had done so, there was very little I would have changed beyond a minor tweak here and there. I really like the change in approach - innocent Mugi/Ui works so well as a contrast to the earthier relationship of the other two couples.

The only major issues I have with Chapter 3 are that I wish it was longer, and that there was an ending section that tied all three chapters together. But as one of the very few who are aware of the RL pressures you face, I understand why you didn't want to prolong the writing process. "Everyone has their good reasons," to paraphrase a line from certain movie.

I will greatly miss your contributions to my own work - I wouldn't be where I am as a writer without your influence - and I'm sad that FFN won't see any more of your writing. But at least you went out in style.

Best,

Genki

P. S. I'm putting this back on my faves list now that it's complete. :-D

I don't care how long it took you to post this it is a great story, will be sad to see you go but it was a good way to end your last post on this site.

Thanks for the parting gift(I consider it as one even though you dedicate it to Genki)
It was a really sweet fic, goodluck with your life :D

Oh my gosh I really liked this! I'll be truthful, the lemon wasn't the best I've ever read (although I just have trouble finding good yuri lemons in general, I think it's because I've been spoilt by all the yaoi fans that are much more prominent, I guess.)

First of all I like how you kept everyone in character, a lot of people struggle with that, myself included, plus I also like how Ritsu got her own second round. I hate it when an entire fanfict is just about a bottom and then they both walk away like nothing is wrong even though especially with guys you think they'd have an obvious boner when they go back, but whatever.

jhgyfguydrgf that ending was so freaking cute, and that was what made me love this instead of just liking it, truthfully. (and I like how you were culturally correct with the bath and stuff, there's nothing more annoying than seeing incorrect culture in fics about characters in Japan XDD)

It was a really great story so far, it has a good touch of passion and romance to really give it charm. But this was posted 7 months ago and I eagerly await the final chapter :X

Just comin in here to re-read this ;D Excite for the next chapter O Keep it up Mamu! I dont know if I got to follow this last time XD

What a nice story! :3 I think the 2nd chap is kinda better than the first one. They both are good, but I feel like the second one is -I don't know- sweeter, with more emotions in it (I just hope I'm not saying this cause there's Mitsu in ch2 XP).

Anyway, yup yup, Genki deserves some applause for sure :) You two really are good partners!

Yosh! Waiting for the next chapter, the MugiUi one, whose title will -hopefully- be 'Kitchen Internlude'. xD

Looking forward to it!

- Kana

So cute, so hot, so romantic. You've balanced them perfectly, and this such a great fanfic to read! Please continue!

Wow loved the whole chapter, from the sweet and cute beginning to the sexy as hell end.

Seriously no complaints.

When I say I can't wait for the next chapter I mean I seriously can't wait for the next chapter!

whats with the father

I really Like your style of storytelling

Oh, I liked a lot! It was so cute and it was so mitsuish with their fluffy feelings and that
Good job!