oh my... I have to cry. How can fiction be so real?

I finished reading this amazing story for the second time today.
Thank you so much for every single moment. It’s incredible and I just love how you portrait the characters and tell their story, and above all how you’ve made me feel

I’m rereading this story since it’s one of my favorites and your chapter 6 has a hodge podge or numbers and backslashes. I can still read the chapter but the numbers are very inconvenient. Hope I can help. Love every moment of this!

This is a nice chapter but I feel like Finnick is OOC in this chapter. Why would he get so angry publicly? Like to the extent where he is totally overwhelmed by anger and nothing can stop him? Doesn't he still have his sanity? We know that he is a calm, controlled and rational individual. So why would he make a huge scene?

Regardless, this isn't cannon.

thank you for this story. so sad to seeing Finnick leaving Annie at the end. Anyway, your story is quite good. like the way you present Annie's PTSD issue.

Maybe I am right, maybe I am not but your style of writing reminds me of another fanfiction- story from Annie POV Where Soul Meets Body. You and the author of that story have this unique way of writing, it is special, don't ever underestimate yourself. And actually I have this crazy idea, that you are the same author, just different accounts. Haha, am I turning into Mad Girl? :D

Yay! I like the poetry for Finnick, it just Works

Every step of this story was magical and perfect and made me feels all kinds of emotion.

Thank you for this incredible and beautiful story. I really enjoyed it even though I cried a lot during the final chapters! I can't describe how perfectly you wrote this beautiful but tragic story:,) Lots of love️

I remember a long time ago (back when this had about 80 chapters) I read it all in one sitting, then - despite having loved it - forgot about it. It's been an absolute delight to rediscover it several years later. A stunning and emotional story, incredibly well done.

And it ends. This is one of the best fics I have read. Thank you.

Another brilliant chapter - love the Rordan exchange and curious to see how it plays out! Nice twist on canon.

This was a brilliant chapter. I love the tie-in with the 12 costumes and the fire the year before. I love that it was Alba who got Finnick out. And Rordan getting to see his parents.

Wow, this is a very evil arena!

I found this recently and am really enjoying it. I think it's brilliant how you are showing Finnick's transition and how he only feels safe right now in the Capitol.