Congrats, you have succeeded in tearing my heart apart from the bad ending.

Omg. This fic was greatt! I mean. I preffer the good ending were Wally is the winner but still. Thanks for the fic.

Wooooow. Did ANYONE else get Tangled vibes from that scene? That whole scene in the tower, with Eugene saving Rapunzel from Gothel. Yup. Disney fan right here.

barry is actully wallys unkle

I just finished this story and I'm honestly speechless. It was amazing from start to finish, and I was so hooked the entire time. I literally stayed up until 4 in the morning reading it and then woke up four hours later so I could finish it. This is one of the best written stories I have ever read, and definitely one of the best Young Justice stories on this entire website. You did an incredible job with this story and the characters and I loved the way you wrapped up the good ending (making Klarion forget was absolutely brilliant). Honestly, the only thing I have left to say is thank you for writing this.

I LOVED THIS IT WAS SO AMAZING AND THE DETAILS WERE GREAT AND EVERY ONES REACTION. I can not read chapter 24 I can't even make my self read chapter 24. I love sad stories with happy endings. Sad endings ruin my life.

This great I really liked the two different endings

This fic is INCREDIBLE. When I started reading the first chapter, I couldn't stop. I've been reading two chapters a day, at least. I have felt many emotions. I've cried a lot. Poor Wally. You wrote very well to the characters. (Savage's scenes were impressive). I loved the moments of friendship, love and family. The plot evolved with each chapter.

This ending is awesome. I loved it. After reading your advice, I won't read the alternate ending. But I loved reading this fic.

Ahhhh! You just killed me with emotion. Seriously, insane writing skills, but each word is a feels killer. Nice job on the whole story and I loved the Good Conquers All chapter best.

Quick Question: why does Roy refer to Wally as his little brother?

why did Klarion want wally to begin with, why wally?

I laughed, cried, squealed, and then internally died, all within 20 minutes of reading this story. This was GLORIOUS. I loved the chapter 23 ending. I just couldn't bring myself to read 24, sorry! I just don't feel like crying YET AGAIN. But seriously, this fanfic was insanely amazing; it could be a published BOOK. XD

wow... im speechless... i-ive.. never been so close to tears from reading anything, and I read allot. I had I knot in my throat and I felt pain in my heart... I wanted so bad stop... but I couldn't, I had to find out. however, im glad I decided to read the bad ending first because now hopefully I'll feel better with the good conquers all ending. im going to go read it now before I start off my day. or else I'll probably be gloomy the rest of... my life!

Nice. I like how you justified their "betrayal" of Wally. Usually it's be something where everyone just woke up one morning with a bone to pick; they say and do things that are completely ooc. So, thank you for the excellent plot.

Roy is just awesome. Nice!