That was absolutely beautiful.

Interesting! Thanks for sharing.

Why was Inuyasha not subdued this time? Oh yeah, your story was great, bye the way. Chow!

Wow. Love this. So intense and primitive.
Very to the point, and very vivid.

Excellent, I enjoyed it muchly.

Wow. That was good. REALLY good.

It IS true in character, and very well written. Well better than most stories I've ever read. And I like that demon Inuyasha didn't just take Kagome on pure lust, but is able to sense and react to her feelings in kind. I like the way you narrate the story too, the story flows very nicely. I like that demon Inuyasha resembles animal, not cold blooded killer and all evilness, and you express him well. :) thank you for a good read

This was amazing!

I really enjoyed your detailed writing style!

I like it (:

H.

Beautiful. That was something that I can tell you really did pour out of your heart. That actually made me want to go back and destroy my crappy fic. Bravo to you, keep writing, you're very good.

i luved it! inu u won and got to call kags ur mate!

that's awsome! i luved it!

Wonderful! Loved it! I spend hours reading through this stuff, and am occasionally rewarded with a story like this!

Ha! When I clicked on your pen-name I was a little afraid that I'd be getting a crap-load of like movie fics or something. Not that they're bad or anything but I am definitely a (hardcore) anime chick lol.

And your line up is pretty freakin wicked ... I'm gonna go read some more.

... this was awesome btw. I've never read an InuYasha POV before, when he's turned full-blood that is. Really, it was well done.

That was awesome. I love it!

Good side says: that was a cute storie ;).

Serious/mean side says: indeed.

Good side says: that was a cute storie ;).

Serious/mean side says: indeed.