Great job, I really liked it! I loved how you showed Axel and Riku's friendship in that, and how they are both screwed up by the boys.

LOVE Riku and Axel's bromance. action and description are incredible and vivid as always, dialogue is perf and reading the song lyrics at the end tied everything together. 3 WHY do i always read your stuff in the library- i want to listen to this piece of awesome music! :)

It's good seeing the story from Riku's perspective. I think this'll be an interesting story.

This is brilliant and I have now downloaded this song. I'm not sure you know how much of my iPod is because of you. It's a lot.

Noooo, I wanted the opposite of this! D:

That said, adjakrhwjbdkaksjrishqjwh wonderfulness YAY. I should probably go listen to this song now, because the lyrics are really intriguing. So... Yeah. Omfg I realllllly want to know exactly what happens *A* I'm just going to Tumblr-stalk you from now. -camps out-

Love, Dawny~

Um...is this all kinds of awesome? HELLZ YEAH! Am I unbelievably excited to read this? ABSO-FUCKIN'-LUTELY!

I enjoy the level of epic bromance happening in your head, I really do. Something's gotta be said for me liking your characterizations more than those in the game, just saying. ;)

This was awesome :) I am completely and utterly excited for this series. I love that we're going to be able to see the story from the different points of view in Living Proof and here in Songs of Dissension

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

These two have possibly the strangest relationship I've ever witnessed. I love it. XD

Honestly though, I love seeing them like this. Not broken in the way that they seem with this (Axel much less so than Riku), but close. It's obvious that nothing is going to stop the two of them from being friends, and it's just as obvious that they're close enough not to worry about what everyone else might think of them being so close. It's fantastic.

Also, I love getting to see a bit more of their side of things with how everything is going down with Living Proof. I mean, I see things from both Roxas and Axel's sides and I don't think anything is really wrong there. They complete each other and they'll figure it out eventually.

As for Riku, now that's an entirely different story. I love Sora. I love him a lot. And you already know that I don't like Riku all that much but- I get it. I get it, and I'm liking him more and more as time goes on (your fault, I'll be honest). I don't like how he sees things between him and Sora simply because I know Sora's side of it, but I...I don't know. I love seeing it because it shows more of Riku, and I understand why he feels the way that he does. It makes sense to me, and I just want them to work things out because they both need it, you know?

As for that ending bit, that was wonderful. Again, it's obvious how close they are. Most people couldn't go back and forth like that when they're at one of their lowest points, and it's nice to see that they can.

Also, the song choice for this is fantastic.

Fuzzyblankets/Lightbloom here.

Oh god. What have you done to Riku. Riku. No. No. Riku I can't handle you like this. I already have too many feels for you Riku, I can't handle you heartbroken and shattered too. Ah. Excuse me. Too beautiful and heart wrenching. Going to cry myself to sleep now. ; -;

I love you. And quite honestly, I could never say it enough to sum up how much I love you. xD Words are pointless because they're not enough. Reviews from me are starting to get a little pointless too because after I read something of yours, I CAN NEVER FORMULATE A PROPER SENTENCE TO DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR WRITING. FUCKING HELL. xD

I just. FUCK. The bromance. It's killing me. I love it so much.

And also. DANE COOK REFERENCE FTW. Hells to the yea.

Oh. And errors. First one I found. "because lets be real" I'm sure you can see what it is. Second one. "They sat and they sulked and the stewed..." And lastly. "You too it as a chance to shut me up."

Just thought you should notice those.

Saix a closet case lol.

Can I just say that you are the most fabulous person in the whole world? Fuck, Axel and Riku cuddling, I can't even. I just can't.

My reviews have become totally pointless because I never know what to say anymore.

Flawless as usual.