Awesome job. Love it. Well done.

I really love this story and do hope you finish it. I know what it is like to lose a loved one and lose your will to write. I am in a similar boat. I will go long stretches with out wanting to write then get an itch to work more on my story. I will get started again then something comes up to distract me and I look up and it has been months and I have lost the passion again. Keep the faith and know your not alone. I will wait for you to finish this story someday. :)

I have liked this story up until the last 2 chapters. What Gibbs is doing to Tony with the re-training and making him go naked in public is wrong. He made a promise to Tony and it is beyond wrong for him to break that promise, especially after everything Tony has been through. I’d be surprised if Tony ever trusted Gibbs again, if it was me I certainly wouldn’t.

Senior is such a disturbingly vile creep! Great job writing him as absolutely terrible! And this Falco character seems just as bad. I feel bad for poor Tony, and the hell he is probably going to be enduring soon.

Great chapter!

Omg I really loved reading both of you story's forced training and forced control will you be doing another part of your story I really hope you do...and all the negative comments you got I wouldn't take no notice of them it's called fiction for a reason but I for one loved your story...well done and very well written xx

What a sweet combination of sweetness and smut here! I love how tender and loving Gibbs is with Tony, but also how he is able to give him just what he needs sexually. :)

Little by little, Gibbs is building a circle of trust. People who will help him to keep Tony safe, and hopefully eventually stop his father. It's good to see McGee can now be counted on too.

I hope that poor Tony will be all right after that frightening ordeal. I hope he's not hurt too badly.

At the beginning of this chapter, I was relieved to see it was only Abby. Then, the chapter ends with a real threat! Poor Tony! I hope Gibbs can get home to him before anything happens!

Oh shit! Who's this intruder! Most likely someone sent by Tony's dad. Creepy bastard.

I'm still loving this story. I love caring, protective Gibbs, and vulnerable Tony! Each chapter gets better, it seems. :)

Poor Tony! So very afraid! I'm just glad that Gibbs is taking his fears seriously and wanting to do what he can to protect Tony.

And Ducky, as usual, is awesome and wonderful!

Godddddddd!
PERFECT AS EVER

Damn, Senior is a creepy SOB! Makes my skin crawl! I hate to think what would happen if he ever got a hold of Tony!

Great chapter!

Aww...I love the sweetness and mutual consideration between Gibbs and Tony. A pretty healthy relationship, considering it's master/slave/ Or at least their trying to make it healthy. ;)

Uh oh! Tony's dad found him...This is not good! I know that Gibbs will fight to keep him, but I hope Tony doesn't go mad with fear.

Loving this story! :D

Such sweet after care from Gibbs. 3 I'm really glad that he and Tony have come to an understanding, and I'm looking forward to seeing what they get up to in their play room. ;)

I have a very bad feeling about their new visitor. I'm sure he was sent by Tony's dad.

Loved this bit of smutty goodness! I adore dominant Gibbs / submissive Tony, and this was perfection! :D