Very interesting story. Kept me entertained for sure, even though I really never liked this Edward, at all. I was trying to justify his actions with women, and killing the hooker, etc. but once I found out he knew Bella was his mate, and he acted that way anyways, I just couldn’t with him. And the fact that Bella was just like, meh, it okay that you sent me to the cottage so you could have an orgy, and it’s okay that after you fed from me you were still gonna go sleep with Irina, and it’s alright that you slept with and then killed that hooker while I was just down the hall.
Bella just seemed like a slightly weak door mat... BUT, I guess that actually makes sense bc is the way she was raised. She was very sheltered and never really had much of a chance to develop a back bone.
Anyways, the story was fascinating. And Alec was just wonderful and broke my heart in the end. I loved the supporting characters in this. Even the evil ones, bc they were fascinating. Your writing is wonderful, and the fact that you wrote this basically by the seat of your pants is awesome! Thanks for sharing your amazing talent!

Thank you for sharing this.
I loved it.
Turns out alec wasn't so bad after all.
So happy it turned out well for them.
I'm glad bella was the one to end aro.
And i glad Edward finally came to his senses.

I have hope Edward can change her.
He would never forgive himself if he did actually kill her.
I'm glad bella was the one to kill Victoria.

Didn't think she was dead.
But she soon will be.
And I wouldn't be surprised is its at the hands of bella.

Oh man.
Why did I have to read this chapter in my lunch break.
I've got to go back to work now.
Damn it.
I'm hoping that jasper is there to help and isn't a snitch.
I thought Aro might try and encourage Edward to kill bella that's why he was going to be there, but I guess it was to see bellas fate. To make him live with betraying Aro.
Alex obviously has a plan. Hope it works

Oh man.
Sucks i have to go to work right now.
I need to know.

Hmmm.
I think her 'nightmares' were trying to tell her something maybe show her.
I could hear aros exact voice from new moon. Still can in my head.
I thought Edward new her already as he mentioned something in one of his chapters and then what bella said when she went to mark him.
Intrigued to find out more.
Can I just say i hate aro and Co right now.
And i want to know who snitched.

But they never found her body.
How can they be sure reily was telling the truth.
I think bella was reliving her time in aros clutches.
Alec wasn't telling her the truth when she said he found her.

Oh dear.
Not sure who I feel more for.
Edward for hearing it, Alice for slipping or bella.

Rolls eyes at Edward being over protective.
Haha

She knows how to get him to bend.
Hehe.
They need to be caught.
Just so Edward and Bella can move on.

Like we didn't know he was jealous.
Haha.

If its not one thing its another.
Hopefully they will end them this time.

how long till she's safe.
They need to mate.
Yeah I'm impatient.
Hehe.

Hmmm.
So wolves are snitches.
But so glad they are back together.