| Reviews for Elements of Harmony |
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Greatazuredragon chapter 10 . 12/17/2016 Nice story good work. |
Greatazuredragon chapter 1 . 12/17/2016 Interesting, nice intro. |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/14/2015 The last chapter sure confuse me a lot!but the other chapter is fabulous!I wonder what will the gaurdian thinks,just curious...is the tenth gaudian remember anything?is the mane six gonna remember the vongola tenth and his guardian?I feel bit sad that they (mane six,vongola X)just know each other for a short time and The vongola X has been seal their memory about the mane six by the "crystal" or something...(i don't know what is happening to the guardian,maybe they just like tsuna)so sad...!But I love your story |
Faliara chapter 10 . 11/9/2013 No one remembers anything? :c Damn... |
chearioes chapter 10 . 2/21/2013 very entertaining. Wish there was more like it. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 7 . 1/11/2013 Alright... Tsuna messed up big time! I mean, first he had no money to pay for dinner which is a great disrespect towards Twilight and she decides to pay for it for being a nice vistior to his world. Still, Tsuna felt bad she had to do that, he's like that. And he continues to learn a lot more about Twilight and her love for knowledge. Holy macs of hell, Muruko Rokudo-sama? Okay, less threating than it seem but still bad news... well would have if they were still enemies... which they are but with a truce. And the kindful Fluttershy, making Tsuna feel like a thousand suns of happiness... and comparing him into her bunny Angel. HAHAHA! So makes sense, well a little. ... Oh dear god. Can Fluttershy... unlock Muruko good half? IF HE HAD ONE! I mean... wow. I can see Chromo, but the man who can kill you with a evil ''kukuku'' chuckle... man. That's... wow. And it seems eevn evil has good and so does Muruko... somehow. Who knew! And now the rage of Hibari might go berserk soon. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 6 . 1/11/2013 Alright, escape school so now Tsuna will take Twilight to a nice restuarant because well... home isn't safe at this time. And because no meat should not be eaten for Twilight, Tsuna thought smart with pasta. And be amazed Tsuna, Twilight's magic bag can hold more than a lot textbooks... tons more! ... I so didn't expected this. I mean... Gokudera and Rarity? Is it because they have thing with the shining and metal jewels or gems or... whatever? I mean, Gokudera has never been this happy and that's saying something. Must be the importance of being the right hand man because this is so the Vongola and Equestria can be allies and to make his Juudaime proud. Well... amazingly enough it's working! Who knew? |
DragonKnight15 chapter 5 . 1/11/2013 That's the Twilight way, make bad people get what they deserve, but still be fair. Although, it was a shame she couldn't go to the library because there was no class... maybe because Hibari made it so because of Pinkie Pie. Anyway, here is the extreme Ryohei vs the speedy Rainbow Dash! A clash of EXTREME vs AWESOMENESS! I so expected Rainbow for not seeing anything impressive about Tsuna, but he is when he is hit by the Dying Will Bullet or goes Hyper Dying Will Mode. Either way, Tsuna so doesn't want to be in the same room as those two. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 4 . 1/11/2013 Barely survive death with wrath of Hibari, Tsuna and Twilight reach class and understood a little about Tsuna. He's not bright, he's not that charming, he's a loser, a No Good Tsuna, but Twilight sees great good and kindness in his heart that no one else would have in one pinkie... unless you were Pinkie Pie. Besides that, Tsuna being treated like that makes Twilight mad and writes it down in her report. It's a shame Tsuna can't understand English huh? And Twilight is strict and won't respect others who don't like someone as good as Tsuna. And here comes Applejack and Yamamoto. Those two are somehow alike, well when it comes to sports. Not to mention it's funny how Yamamoto never asks why Applejack is named like that, he's just too friendly to understand... just wait for the Tenth's ''right-hand man'' Twilight. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 3 . 1/11/2013 Alright, a quick race to the school before the bell rings... and sadly it did. And now that they're late, Hibari appears from the clouds to destroy anyone... well would have if he didn't have to deal with the laughter of Pinkie Pie. OH MY GOD! Hibari has met his match. Then again, Pinkie Pie is undefeatable, no matter who she faces, minus Discord. But someone against Hibari Kyoka... oh god no! She's either having a blast, or she has no idea who she's messing with. And Tsuna has met the most happiest pony in existence. No one can match Pinkie Pie to how happy and happy going she is. And it's a good thing against Hibari or he would have bitten her to death with one glare. At least there is a chance... and they are a very odd pair... VERY! |
DragonKnight15 chapter 2 . 1/11/2013 Well... some title. It's short and it's... an odd one... well with any chapter that has Lambo, is weird. Is it a human or a cow boy. Hahahah! Good one! I thought the same thing too until Adult Lambo appear. And that was one person in Tsuna's life... can't wait for the next. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013 Tsuna is off to another adventure, well fun little experience once again! Just a normal day for Tsuna, well more normal without Reborn pushing him around. Until well, he finds out that the Vongola will make an alliance with the magical land of Equestria and that's saying something! Now he has the duty to watch over and show great respect towards Twilight Sparkles in her human form and her friends who are in his home at this time. Can he do it? I mean, this is Tsuna and his world isn't as perfect as the next. So can he? Let's find out. Nice job keeping the characters in check, especially Reborn, Tsuna, Twilight and Spike who are the first few. Heck even Princess Celestia too for saying she sees something different in Tsuna than the others. And that's a good thing. Tsuna is different and that will help this union... or will it? |
strijer987 chapter 7 . 12/3/2012 good work |
THAT SONG chapter 5 . 10/9/2012 I was listening to You're Gonna GO Far, Kid while reading this! xD |
Connection of Complication chapter 10 . 4/3/2012 Why you don’t make a sequel? Good story! |