Oh I love it haha!

Lol

Lol, that’s hilarious! I hadn’t read it before because of the 50 Shades part, but this time around, I saw that it was a parody. Glad I checked it out...Native American to Latino! Haha, kills me.

Haha! That was a riot!

lol
This is hilarious.
Thank you

I loved this. Too freakin' funny. Particularly loved the references to the nonwhite friends. Thanks for the chortle!

*gags* *chokes* okay, I am still laughing!
LMAO! This is the best parody I have read so far. Great job! You made my day :D

This made me cackle. The people around me were concerned, because I tried to not laugh and I had to.

You made my was probably the best fan fiction I've read in a while. :D Keep up the good ;)

Hahahaha loved it!

lol lol lol Nothing like a parody/crackfic to end the day on a high note::))

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

*bursts out laughing*

True, there were some parts of this story I laughed at and other parts that shocked me. Well, it seems those who reviewed are right about Ana; she is annoying and Christian Greyson is a control freak. Abusive relationships aren't romance, so I can understand why you'd poke fun at both Twilight and 50 Shades.

What was funny was how Ana would repeat the same word so many times in the same paragraph. What really set me off laughing was this paragraph: His eyes, I notice suddenly, are grey. This is great, thinks my inner goddess happily. She is very pleased, because while I think about steely grey Edwistian’s eyes are, I can also think about how “steely” and “grey” are kind of like both our last names, and I will seem very clever to myself. It's such a ridiculous last part of a paragraph.

Now I know I won't read 50 Shades or watch the movie (I wasn't planning on it anyway). I'm not into that stuff and it's sad how the population can get into this kind of rubbish. The least the author could do was spell-check, and write a decent story that didn't act like the last thousand stories that follow this pattern. Honestly people, can't you write something decent for once that actually has a plot and is interesting? Some of us are out of our minds looking for something interesting to read. That was to everyone, not to you. You did well with this story, even though I don't normally read stories with this much adult stuff in it.

Aria Breuer

That was the best thing I have read in a while! I laughed so hard at the Joseacob having skin that isn't white part. Good stuff!