Reviews for Rain |
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aloistrancy8 chapter 1 . 5/22/2015 Awww! I really like the ending. It's a nice touch |
AnImEaNdCrImE chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 This was good, heartwarming story. :) And I really appreciate that you based it off of real historical events in Italy. No one seems to do that in fanfictions much anymore, so thank you and nice job! |
damtoti chapter 1 . 5/31/2013 I really liked the beginning half of this, until it turned to the delivery scene. There you needed to do a bit more of show rather than tell. You pretty much rushed through the whole thing, saying "this happened", then "this happened", etc. I think you should have actually written out the delivery scene if you wanted to include that part in here. And also when Spain said "You really care about your people, don't you?". Romano was just passing out food, not really dying for them. It's supposed to be natural for a nation to prioritize their people, so I thought his comment was kind of stupid. |
taitoluv chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 Can't help but think there's something cruel about the way they treated each other. Damn, Spain, can't you tell after centuries that all the 'chigi' and 'bastardo' are terms of affection? That's a little OOC for me, but hell, it doesn't do much to the overall perfection of this piece and thank you for writing it. |
AnimeGirl9894 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 I loved it! I loves how it was historically accurate and it had lots of Spain and Romano! Great job! |
TeamBullshitLS chapter 1 . 5/11/2012 Love the story, it's really good. Keep writing! TotalDirectioner |
roseblanche93 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012 Your story is really cute, I really like it. Just one thing: Italy was unified 1861, and Rome joined the new State only in 1870. |
Potato Potter-Septim chapter 1 . 5/7/2012 Niiice ;) |
Starship Artisan chapter 1 . 4/3/2012 That was a great story, it was quite justified and I liked the historical accuracy |
Kensy Echo chapter 1 . 4/2/2012 Oww! It's really sweet and touchy story Q-Q I like the part when Romano cares of his people and when it's started raining when romano crying... Great story Q-Qb |
Aulophobic Clarinetist chapter 1 . 4/2/2012 that was so sad! and I loved that the end was slightly hopeful |
OurLordDisco chapter 1 . 4/2/2012 Awwww! :D This was so sweet! I think I've just fallen in love with Spamano... |
Dogsrule chapter 1 . 4/1/2012 Wow...sad..but cute! :D |
TheAmazingMaple chapter 1 . 4/1/2012 This is so good! I love the ending! |