make another chapter. this chapter was every good and it was funny and cute

the end was kinda implying that Korra died... hopefully though, i'm wrong O_O

Nice keep up the work love the story it's fiery :)

Keep on writing!

Nice first fanfic! Please write more!

why did mako's smirk turn into a frown? i wanna know~~~~

great fic by the way(cant believe its your first fanfic...), but if u separate the paragraph it would be easier to read, since ppl dont like to read a total paragraph and usually like to skim through

really like it, hope for a sequel?;)