Wow I and look forward for more of this story!

I'm so sad no one has continued this; this is by far the best Scream fanfic I've read and it's not even in the second chapter.

Wowza! You certainly created an interesting setup for this chapter, that's for sure. Fanfic characters getting killed off by the same characters they write about- now that just makes it even creepier...

Great job!

O_O wow...this was so eerie and scary! I wouldn't want this to happen to me! Having your story come to life is what every writer dreams of...but not this kinda way XD I wouldn't know what to do if this happened to me. The atmosphere in the chapter was great; the way you built it up made it all the more chilling. The scene was great. I could imagine it in my head. You two make a great team!

P.s. the line "I can see you" freaked me out a little. I was reading that bit while my sister came up behind me and blew in my ear. Scared the bejeezus outta me! -_ lol Awesome work. I look forward to reading more from you two in the future :3

I love this story XD

it was interesting.

You can't just leave it there! That's such a cruel cliffhanger...Very nicely written. I got chills up my spine just reading it.

Poor Joy.

Aaah the life of a young writer... I could totally understand her and sympathize. Then omg, creepy phone call, and... EEEK. Baaad mental images now! So that means it's well done, of course. :D

Thomas, i can never thank you enough for this. it is just so great that you not only helped me with this story but written so much better than i could have. it's so tense and i was genuinely scared when reading this and i know what happens lol. thank you again, you are amazing. as is this story. :) xx

Very nice chapter, very well done. I like your descriptions. Plus, it's fairly original. Update soon.;)