I enjoyed this one a lot. I loved this AU (I love AUs in general, anyway) and this Ghirahim was absolutely, delightfully perfect! I didn't actually see the twist coming with Link's muteness and true reason for his writer's block. Well done. I'm sad there's no sequel, but I still really liked this story on its own.

Really enjoying this one so far. And disheveled Ghirahim is absolutely hilarious for some reason. XD

I was looking for the sequel and there was none. Please know that this fic is so stangely interesting it just consumes your being for the time you read it. So... finding a sequel would fill everybodys heart with rainbows. Maybe someday... you will really make one...?

Hello there! I don’t know if you’ll see this but I read this fic when you first wrote it and I still think about it sometimes. :) I hope you’re doin well!

Thank you for writing a very beautiful, character-building story! It sounds like Zelda got caught up in something nasty, and I wonder if Link somehow indirectly caused Zelda's death... If you ever come back to writing the sequel, know that you have at least one avid reader ready to support you!

I hope one day you'll come back and do the sequel. This has to be one of my favourite stories.

w-where is the sequel? T.T Please post it! I'm a big fan of your work, and this is my absolute favorite zelda fic on the internet. Words do not even describe how much I love Ghirahim in this story! I've had my eye on your author page for a few years now, hoping for a sequel. If you won't write anymore, can I PM you for the right to continue the sequel? This story has so much potential and it pains me to see it go to waste. T.T

This fic was sooo good ''
made me laugh everytime with the fab cx

Hi! I REALLY, REALLY LOVE this history, and I hope you can write a new like this... I start to read the sequel a few months ago, and I like it a lot, but now I dont find it. I dont know where are, or if you erase it (THIS IS A QUEESTIOOOOOON XDDD). Please, respond if you did it (or Im going to kill you MUAHAHAHAHA :EPICFACE:), Errrr or something. I cant say more because English is not my native lenguage, and also sorry for the ortography. I hope you write some more about this history! REALLY!

This was absolutley genius! it was so amazing and then that WTF moment in the ed and i was all like holy shit! I can't wit for the sequel especially since i ead the title for it :,( oh gosh something bad's gonna happen!

When Link pulled out the gun i was like...he had a gun?! and then the fa he kept Zelda's bloodied up purse makes me think, did link...kill her? since he mentioned they were in a fight!

I love it please write more

Great story! I think you capture Ghirahim's... erm... flambuoyant personality really well. But I do have a quick question about something that confuses me. In Ch. 4, someone says "Don't give me that. We did communicate already, so where's the problem?" Is it Link or Ghirahim? It sounds like Link, but he hasn't said one word so far. If you could clear that up that would be awesome!
Really great!

*sits back* Wow. I'm sure you hear this a lot, but I was really skeptical about this story. A good friend of mine highly recommended it to me, and the moment she said "Ghirahim is a journalist" I started rejecting the idea. But, I know her taste in writing is high quality and I've loved everything she's ever recommended, so I took a chance on an AU fic. I'm baffled. Your writing style is so much fun to read, and I love how you develop Ghirahim's character with narration that's almost like reading his own thoughts. I was also surprised by how well Link's character is created, since he hardly spoke. You nailed this! I'm floored my the intricate, developing plot, and I can't get enough of watching Ghirahim be the little princess that he is. And you did an amazing job of creating sympathy for both him and Link. Ghirahim's character in this (and technically in the game as well) is the kind of person I hate but you make him fun to read, and I actually feel really bad for him. Watching his world come crashing down and stoop to drinking made me want to give that magnificent bastard a hug, no matter how horrible and insensitive he has been to Link. Your writing and characterization really makes this story, and I absolutely love it! Can't wait to start reading the sequel, but it is now 2am and I need to sleep. XD Bravo!

Oh my, I really like the epilogue. It was so tense, I was frightened!

However, I'm a bit confused as to why Link felt the need to back Ghirahim up against the wall and scare the living daylights out of him, when all he needed was to get to the safe.

I'm also so glad you are writing a sequel, because this is one of my most favourite Ghirahim /Link stories. I hope you update soon, like really soon. No pressure :)

Great ending! I figured Link wasn't intending to shoot Ghirahim, but it was still a relief when he shot the wall instead. I like the idea of them reluctantly teaming up. There's a lot of tension between the two of them, and some fun friction. I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel, especially after all those new mysteries surrounding Zelda were revealed!