| Reviews for Heaven |
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   Angelaaab chapter 21 . 8/18 toujours pas de suite ! tu peux pas t'arrêter là ! |
| FeatherMoonSky chapter 21 . 7/13/2019 An unfinished story is heartbreaking, but an unfinished story ending on a parting? Unbearable. I truly hope that someday you will remember this beautiful story and that you will find the motivation again to finish it |
| Coconut chapter 21 . 6/6/2019 La esperanza es tan triste, pero sigo teniendo esperanza en lo que usted mencionó en su perfil. Que no iba a dejar ni una historia incompleta, así que seguiré esperando una actualización. :") |
| nsymina chapter 21 . 9/13/2018 i really hope you will continue this tho |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 14 . 6/7/2018 Yay! They've been reunited lol 33 |
| Short Chocobo chapter 21 . 6/7/2018 I really hope you come back someday and finish this. When you do I will definitely be there to read it. |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 13 . 6/7/2018 AWESOME! Fuck this story is soo good! And realistic! I like how sasuke controls himself and doesn't give into sleeping with tenten. He seems to really care about her feelings and not want to lead her on. But he's so messed up tho. He denies himself love from her and thus any form of happens because he believes he doesn't deserve it. Loving it! And when sasuke revealed his ultimate plan... mwahaha! It's so accurate. Like I could imagined him doing this in canon (if Pain hadn't destroyed the leaf first) lol. Anyway I can't wait to read on... |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 12 . 6/7/2018 Sasuke is so powerful... the bandits kinda deserved it after their senseless acts of evil... Anyway, loved how this chappie ended. :) |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 11 . 6/7/2018 You did great! Omg I just love how it's not that sasuke doesn't care, but he cares too much.. |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 10 . 6/7/2018 I like how Sasuke's actions contradict his words... anyway this was an exceptional chapter! Gee, stubborn Uchiha. His pride nearly got him killed. It's very unsuprsing that sasuke would insist he's fine whilst travelling with a life threatening injury lol if I didn't know any better, id think he actually wants tenten to just let him die and end his inner suffering. Poor sasuke |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 9 . 6/7/2018 A possessive sasuke.. it's interesting and alluring lol. It's like he was insecure that another male was touching her. And it's like he views the scars he gives her as meeting her as his property? |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 8 . 6/7/2018 I really loved how you developed the dynamics between sasuke and tenten...and how sasuke justificies his sudden interest in her as a side effect of his injury lol |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 7 . 6/7/2018 Aww... yeah anyone who didn't know any better would still not know the truth about uchiha massacre! So I find it interesting that tenten listens to Sasuke's conspiracies in his sleep and probably thinks he's more insane lol |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 6 . 6/7/2018 Aw tenten is so down to earth, that despite all the wrongs sasuke has done to her, she still feels sorry for him. No offence to Neji, but he'd be easily defeated against sasuke if he tried to rescue her... |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 5 . 6/7/2018 I really like how you've portrayed sasuke , he's dark and it seems accurate to canon as I imagine and his inner feelings. I also like how you play with this idea of him barely crossing a thin line of insanity |
