Well, frankly, I think a statis pod is too good for this guy, but...great job. I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.

Hello, I just red your story and it is really FANTASTIC! I sat on the tip of my chair the whole time, it was so exciting, thrilling, angst filling and emotional that I am very happy I could read your compleet story and didn't have to wait for each chapter! I loved Brennan's (my favourite!) torture (evil grin!) and his vulnerability, just like he is in the serie a Machoman with a loving, caring, touching, soft heart! Oh..Yeah, this would really be a FANTASTIC episode for the serie, I would be fixed on the screen the whole time! From beginning till end filled with ACTION, lots of ACTION! But never mind I saw it happen in front of my eyes while I red it! So you had my devoted attention the whole story!

FANTASTIC..FANTASTIC..LOVED..LOVED..IT!

KEEP ON WRITING STORIES BRENNAN-CENTRED WITH LOTS OF ACTION, ANGST, TORTURE, EMOTION, VULNERABILITY AND THRIL!

This one was wonderfull!

I really found your story to be intresting. You are a great author and your ending was really satisfying. Keep writing!

Aw...soo sweet the ending...great story..love it ...

Just got your review (thank you!) and wanted to see what else you'd written.
Some very powerful stuff here, especially your description of Geris' insanity. And the little comments here and there (Elliott...I wish I wasn't trying to read this) that make it really believable. Very, very well done.
Only thing I would add as a constructive criticism is that before you write you might want to rough out a basic outline, just so that you can know that you're giving enough 'screen time' to the points leading up to the climax and the climax itself; I found in this story that the climax came and went very quick. Balancing your plot is important to readability and suspense. This used to be one of my biggest problems as a writer, and it's one I'm working on, so I tend to recognize it :). But, nonetheless, very very good show!

Oh this was a wonderful story- I woke up this morning wanting to read a Brennen story- and I'm so glad I found yours. You have wonderful writing, i hope to find more of your stories soon!

Woman, where have you been my whole fanficing life? *sigh* This is what fanfiction is all about! Write more. You've captured the characters perfectly! You've...you've...*breathes deeply* You've written one of the best goshdarn fics ever. I love it.

Wow. You're good. This is an absolutely fantastic story! The whumping! The romance! Oh gosh, you have to write more stories! You seriously have a gift.

I could use this review to rehash the absolute excellence of this story...
But it seems that those who have reviewed here have done so far beyond my poor power to add or detract, so I am going to use this review to talk about your chapter titles.
Instead of calling your chapters 'default chapter, chapter 2, chapter 3, etc' you have given us words, which is quite nice. You have also resisted the temptation to use song lyrics, which is sort of abrasive...and your titles are lovely.
One can tell that the story is going to be good by looking at the chapter titles, and they are not dissapointed in reading it.
I award this fic review cum laude.

I found the story very interesting, kept my attention, and wanting to see what happened next. Good story teller. Didn't rush the ending like so many other do.

Very, very good. Keep it up.

Ack. Just ack. I loved this story... and I know squat about Mutant X. (how very sad...) You did a great job of getting the characterization across to the MX ignorant It also helped that it was blatant whumping... which kept my attention... u.u

Your word choice and phrasing is nice and very pleasent (in a whumping sort of way) to read, ('cept for "psi" *twitch*) and the vocabulary is well-rounded and advanced (myev.)

You're a great writer, as such deserve to be obliterated... but... great story. Write more.

Yeah.

At first I thought this story was OK, but by the end I was totally hooked! Great job and write more Brennan stories!

Your wrting style is great. And the storry...I love it! )

Loved it! The ending was great! It started out sad but then just blossomed into something beautiful. I'm glad Brennan faced his fear. Once again it was great, and hopefully you will write some more stories. I know that I will be looking out for them!