Aaand now my heart broke.

Dreadwing, you ass. Poor poor KO . . .

I love this and how you played it out. Very well written

I started watching Prime because Breakdown had been in the WFC game.

And then he got killed.

I like how you expressed Knock Out's dislike of Dreadwing and how that just accelerates as he figures out the circumstances of Breakdown's death.

Good job!

Really good. Maybe Knockout goes crazy later in the story.

I have to say, it turned my stomach into knots when BD screamed . . . poor KO . . . *sobs*

I'll admit; I'm one of the first to complain about kiddie shows that just *toy* the line of edgy and some part of me just wishes they'd do something drastic-but it's always too sad when a cool character actually *dies*. Dangit-I really liked Breakdown! I spent a whole, like, three seconds thinking he'd make it... and then I had to remember it was Arachnid he'd gone against. Poor fool never stood a chance, huh?

Great story. You captured the mood well, and now, I'm gonna go be sad ;_; okay?