Just so you know, my mom actually cooked onions today SO I AM NOT CRYING AT ALL
Great writting, heartbreaking story, loved it :)

you almost made me cry...

Oh the feels! I wasn't prepared for it... :'(
But seriously good though :p

Great story.

... okay are you serious i was feeling pretty upbeat right and then i read this and OMFG FEELS

(no actually i love it it's just, MY FUCKING FEELS OKAY)

Okay. Okay.

Holy crap this was so amazing. And by amazing I mean *really fucking sad*, but oh my god you write beautifully, so beautifully, and just EVERYTHING WAS PERFECTION. Stiles' dad's reaction, Scott, holy christ DEREK- just, how. Do. You. Write. How do you write so that I feel tiny and insignificant in the face of such incredible talent and skill and aslkjaskdjnalkjn DEREK DOESN'T LET GO

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what this does to my heart, seriously

just, everything. Everything about this. EVERYTHING.

"'Don't tell him I carried him bridal-style.'" I think you just shattered my heart into a million itty bitty pieces. "'Come on, son,' sheriff Stilinski says, and he sounds even worse than before. He probably shouldn't be out of bed.' Just- holy, holy, crap, this is just

ALL THE FEELS

is there an adoration button I can hit or maybe a complete life-ruiner piece of fanfiction and skill button idk but I would click all of them because *this*

You are such an amazing, incredibly talented author, and please don't stop writing, because the things you produce are just so, so good. And good is actually a rather horrifically insufficient word to describe what an absolutely AMAZING piece of writing this is, and I'm not one of those types who could ever express things coherently anyway- so I'll just say (and I mean it sincerely): this is one of the best things I've ever read.

Bravo.

Please write more this is amazing ! :)

Dammit, I cried...This was such a good story though!

I love how Derek's disbelief shows. It's not obsession, it's juste that he can't process the truth, cannot compute because it decently canot *be*. Lovely. I love this kind of things.

(wo)Man, these broken heros-guys gives us so much fic potential!

pleas write more. this is so beatiful and ansty at the same time. lovely.

Lovely story. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)