Soooo... Hmmm. I absolutely love thus story. It has pissed me off so many times (in a good way). I love stories that suck you in and make you feel everything with them. I hope you finish it eventually.

Oh please update soon, it's really good! And I really want you to finish this story, you have so much potential, your a awesome writer and I really hope you continue this story.

Love this story! Please update soon!

Someone has a sense of humor.

Okay, it really pisses me off when I read a story that has a lot of potential but has a shaky start, and I think 'Oh, they may be a new author so their skills should improve as time goes by, and may even get a revamp when they get a beta!' Only to be utterly disappointed with the continued lack of Organization, Cohesiveness, Smooth plot and time line, and Details. You keep adding crazy new content to the story line that makes no sense to previous chapters and is obviously an act of desperation. Like Ch.7 with the supposes 'reveal' of Stiles drunk calling Derek. That was stupid and lacked imagination or finesse. And you have had Danny repeat the same shit SERMON to Stiles, for Three Chapters in a row. And, DONT get me started on your nonsensical Flashbacks(Not smooth at all), Obvious Jump Cuts of Stiles suddenly appearing to Derek out of no where after being gone, and varying time frames for Stiles absence. I mean you went from him being gone for 2yrs to 1yr to 3yrs. WTF!? I hate nothing more then someone with clear TALENT and story of Potential being ruined by such clear Laziness and Complacency. You Can Do Better!

Please don't take so long to update the next chapter :( the wait was KIIIIIILLLLLLING me!

Great chapter. Yay Peter is finally dead. Awww poor Nic at least his death wasn't in vain. Can't wait for next chapter.

Not to be mean but, WHY THE HELL AREN'T U IS AN AMAZING ASS STORY AND I THINK IT SHOULD BE CONTINUED.I saw the last time it was updated (seriously not trying to be rude) PLEASE don't be one of those authors who have awesome stories then leave their stories high and dry.(p.s. sorry again don't know why ur not updating probably something personal,but please don't forget about this story)

I feel like I'm reading a very dramatic Mission Impossible movie. I love it!

oh! exiting!

Great chapter. It's about to go down Peter your about to go down.

That's f*d up. I don't even know where to start on how f*d up that situation was. I see from Stiles point of view because I am baren, and if my hubby had a kid with someone else I would run to. I think it's sweet that Derek wants to be part of his kids life. Danny shouldn't have threatened Derek with taking his kid away, that is too much pain for anyone to bare.

I love your story :))
But i got so frustrated! I wish Stiles wouldn't take Derek back and he would of just left and ignore the whole pack from the pressure they're giving him to forgive Derek. Stiles should of disappeared again then probs let the pack think about what they're doing and stuff. And i hate Danny ._. He should fuck off.

Great chapter, it was hot also. Glad they made up and got down and dirty. Is Stiles able to get prego like danny is and if so, Derek may have knocked him up. Cant wait for thd next chapter,

So I don't know if this is important but this chapter never appeared on my feed. I got the notification as a subscriber but I can't find it on the site