This story is amazing! I really hoped you'd completed it, but it's beautiful all the same! Thank you :*

I absolutely love your story and I hoping you haven't give up on it! I loved the sex scenes, the plot, the characters! I hope you ll continue it!

will you be makeing more?! :D

This is really good. Hope there's more coming soon.

Oh man, I'm normally not a shipper but I am completely hooked by your story. Please tell me that's not the end?!

very good story

Oh my God. Sorry, but I have no constructive crtitisism for you. This is one of the best Bruce/Dick fanfics I have ever read. I would love to read more of this and hope you continue. But I have one request, please make it a happy ending! I would die if these two never ended up together. This story is amazing! Can't wait for your next update.

I really tried to be critical, but there is nothing here to criticize. Loving the direction this is taking. Keep it up

This requires another chapter! Please? Great job.

UGGG you got me good with this one.

Reel me in with what seems like a happy, lovey-dovey ending, to move forward in what everyone outside of them knows is inevitable (IMHO)... only to dash it to rocks with their relationship's status quo.

I hope you write more for this piece. since so much could be said of what happens after (Bruce's breakdown, if Dick's willing to repeat their hurtful affair after seeing Bruce break down and hearing those oh so wanted/needed words). Alfred's side of this, after all Bruce probably fears the older man's rejection more than all of Gotham concerning this relationship. I wonder what Dick would do to force Bruce's hand more if the bat-clan accepted what he wants in their relationship...

Well, actually, I hope you write more for this couple in the future. Your handle of their motivations and their character, the barely hidden emotions (in Bruce's end), and your understanding of the whole sadness of what can be a beautiful relationship that Bruce believes can't/shouldn't happen is perfect.

Thank you for sharing this piece I had a great time reading it, loved your prose, word flow/choices, and the premise of this piece.

a Dick who's devious in getting what he wants? yum

I've run across plenty of fics where Dick forces Bruce into action but never one where he actually sounds almost menacing in doing so. He sounds so much like a predator who wholly knows his prey (which Dick does out of everyone sans Alfred) and kudos for that. It's refreshing to see Dick longing but at the same time with so much control.

Really, how Dick is almost menacing in this part is very very surprising, considering how much pain he/they deal to each other after the act. Almost sadistic and masochistic.

thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of Bruce/Dick angst love. :D

Poor boys!

very good story

I really enjoyed this. You took the power struggle Dick and Bruce have, and gave it a new form. Their lives are so entwined that they're always pushing away and pulling closer. It's no wonder their relationship is so full of stress. I genuinely believe that they love and respect each other, but both are so stubborn and similar that they butt heads like no other.

I enjoyed this. Your writing flows nicely, and you've really captured this sort of uncomfortable interaction between these two characters. Interesting fic. :D

wow I REALLY liked this story. Do you think you'll make another chapter?