This is good

Kind of quick irony at the end there. "I am not going anywhere." "With that she turned around and left." Context, etc aside, I thought it rather amusing.

Yeah, Tim and Ziva - them two being together does make sense.

Ziva has always been much more of a friend than Abby and Tony and to some extent Gibbs... They are all nothing more than bullies just like Tim's dad, the Admiral, was.

Really nice, romantic story, thanks

Okay, I have to start off by saying I'm not usually a McGiva fan. BUT, it's really urking at me. And I see all these McGiva picks on Tumblr and they are so cute together! Eeep. I think I am transforming into McGivaer. :D

Great one shot! I loved it. :D

Awesome job i loved this

and Sarah was so funny

I loved it! Theres not enough McGiva in this world

Lovely story! This unfolded so nicely and I loved Sarah's role.

Those lilies sound pretty.

When I opened this in a new tab, my browser suddenly crashed. I think much like me, it couldn't take the absolute sweetness and the amount of cute in this.

I love how Ziva actually gets second thoughts about snooping and doesn't break his trust like that. When she helped Tony snoop on the show, I actually thought it was OOC for her, but at least she was "only" watching out for signs of McGee approaching instead of actually going through his things...

And I really like your Sarah *nods*

A very nice McGiva, thanks!

Awww so sweet I just loved it! but

Smackalicious McGiva McBrilliant