Kinda gloomy and sad, but aren't many good ones?;) liked it.

This is really good! :)

Apart from being non-canon, I liked your the way you put Ryuuji in his situation about his father. Will continue the story, I would love to read more!

i just.

this was beautiful.

;A;

interesting take on ryuuji's feelings on his father...

very interesting.

/ i like it. oo /