This was just perfect. You write in their voice so well!
I was laughing a lot at their banter- especially when Sam called Dean a nag and then later when he started explaining the doctor/death rate statistic.
But I really loved how well you showed their concern for each other. The bit at the end was heartwarming.

Hey there:) A wonderful story, just the right amount of comfort after the rather "hurt-focused" episode, you did the characters well and the writing was lovely. In the description it says WIP, does that mean i can still hope for a continuation?

omg..that was sooo cute! superb writing!

This is a real lovely story. Thank you.

OH MY GOODNESS! Totally loved it! :)

Nice! You've got their voices down. I can very much imagine most of this conversation taking place and wish it had. Cool!

I would have never been able to think of a rhyme for zombie but of course Sam would.

Good story. I enjoyed this tag to the episode, and how you had Sam looking after Dean's sleep patterns the same way Dean was looking after Sam's. Thanks for sharing! -tvj12

I just realized I haven't read this story.

I love how you wrote Dean and Sam. They were both exhausted and needing to sleep, but continued to worry about each other. It was also great how you pointed out that Dean couldn't have gotten much sleep either with all of his driving between states.

I also like how you wrote Dean's thoughts about Castiel and not forgiving him right away. Dean will always put Sam first, so it makes sense that he could still be mad at the angel for 'breaking' his brother.

I had to smile during the first chapter when Sam used his 'deep, deep rumble voice' to argue with Dean.

What a wonderful conversation between the brothers in the third chapter. I felt sorry for Sam when he admitted "I thought I was going to die and you wouldn't be there."

I loved Dean's response, "I was not going to let you die in that hospital, alone or otherwise. It just wasn't going to happen. All right?" (Nice that you reminded us Sam did die alone once)

I loved how you described Dean's emotions as he thought about how had got his little brother back again. Plus Sam was right, once he left the hospital, '... is just the first chance we've had to just sit together - I mean me being me and only me - '

I enjoyed reading your story.

Thanks for the smile!

Really nice. I like the moment that Dean nearly loses it and Sam immediately wakes up.

Ahh man, this was wonderful. :D I love how you write their interaction; it's so natural. On a side note - I'm really glad you were able to get your publishing rights back. Keep up the great work; I look forward to more.

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"When have we ever died when we weren't together?" A question only the Winchesters can ask!

And Sammy giving Dean an excuse for his breakdown 33333

And "Abercrombie"! LOL

Loved this so so so much (have I already said that?)

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Thanks for another awesome story.

Loved the look into Dean's head and how they interacted here, how they know each other better than they know themselves. Also loved that Dean finally felt safe enough with Sam "right there" to break down - yeah, I know, not that he planned on it, but the fact that he sat down and thought and let himself feel everything he usually keeps supressed so much that it takes his little brother to even get a glimpse that it's there at all.

And, as always, you wrote it beautifully. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Take care, D.

I love this chapter as I have all the previous ones. I am so happy to be able to enjoy your writing again - should I send a note to "she who must not be named"? :) All kidding aside, I enjoy your work so much and look forward to every post.

Charlotte