Beautiful. I really liked how you showed the ugliness of humanity (hatred, greed, envy and such), because however people may deny it, it is part of being human. You cannot take the good parts of life without the bad ones, and you portrayed that very well. Good job! I enjoyed it!

Damn interesting...I know this is just FanFiction, but with the latest chapters out, all this is a moot point. But damn well impressive none the less. I take it this was the groundwork before your masterpiece? I loved it.

So this is the original form of He Who Will Establish Peace And Order: Samsara, very interesting.

is this story different to the other 'he who will establish peace and order'?

Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon

I was reading the full version of this story. and I came to read this plot. It seems like some parts are straying from the plotline? But yea.. I really hope orochimaru won't die.. it's a shame.. or at least like.. near death but comes back to life later? coma? some kind of defence mechanism he created? that would be awesome.. as for the ending.. he disappeared.. does that mean he sacrificed himself to revive all of those people?

Short, yet very emotional...

awesome

man... this gave me shivers reading this is awesome man i decided to read this before i read the actual story lol nice job

An absolutely wonderful, enlightening story. This is my favorite naruto fanfiction. Please keep writing.

I just cant underestand, why almost no one is revieving this. Its such beautiful story. Not many times i said i am speechless(at least when you compare it to number of stories i readed) and i am saying it here again. Even thougt its a little paradox.

Wow. Despite the grammar errors, the story was pretty good.

I read it while listening to "E Nomine" so it made this extremely epic. :)

The idea behind the story is good, and hold merit to it. Perhaps you could explain in more detail how naruto in this story came to be, and how all the events of the world led to the conlusion. Also extend a bit more in the ending of how naruto become rikudou sennin and how he came into the past.