Came here from the US UK story. Too bad this was never finished because it looked like it was really funny.

Love!

Oh, my gosh, I love this. I don't know if I left a review on Recalculating but I loved that, too. But the humour in this reminds me of Terry Pratchett books. I hope you get the chance to continue this because I'd love to see if Alfred is the one who set off the traps - because that'd be hilarious and give Ludwig another headache, I'm sure.

Let me guess what adventurer decided to go to Darkhelm...Alfred?

Loved the story so far! I hope you decide to continue it:) (btw I have a guess about who the adventurers are;) )

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this story so much. SOOO MUCH! The way you write is simply fabulous. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Absolutely hilarious story! I love the sorta Hades/Persephone feel this story gives off to me and the video game landscape!

This is beautiful and it really made me laugh. Are you going to be continuing it anytime soon?

hey please continue this! It's so amazing!

This story is absolutely delightful. It's rather difficult I find to locate stories that are well-written and in character. This is both, and it's marvelous. Please consider continuing this! It's superb and very funny!

Yep, please continue!

UPDATE!

Definitely continue. It's rare to find a fic that's actually funny and sweet. Keep on!

Awwww! Cliffie! and I must absolutely admit this is one of the most humorous and engaging stories I've ever read! I hope you would continue. Really. I love it to bits!

I love this fic. It's clever and creative and has good characterization. I love the wit. Most humor fics remind me of a child on a sugar high; they bounce around and come up with random ideas and think it's funny. This fic has a wonderfully voice that has well-thought humor. Thank you very much for writing it and please continue.