Reviews for Cracks in Time
Guest chapter 13 . 7/13/2015
Kind of want a series similar to these past couple of chapters where it is Kaguya dragging Sasuke around forcing him to go on crazy adventures, also I wish the Kaguya scene was longer
Fan chapter 13 . 6/28/2015
cool
Geneu chapter 13 . 6/27/2015
I definitely have a soft spot for Sasuke x Hanabi and Sasuke x Tenten (who's not like Kakashi at all in the end :D)
Naruto and Sasuke hitting a bar in Suna sounds nice. But Sasuke does need those ice packs...
Danish78 chapter 13 . 6/27/2015
Fun chapter! Thanks!

I liked every part, though I wanted more of the Kaguya bits as I've never had the chance to read anything of the sort. Thanks again and stay golden! )
ImTheUchiha chapter 12 . 6/21/2015
Amazing and hilarious as always. Was was waiting for a Cracks in Time chapter based on this fic for quite sometime :)
TheNightingale13 chapter 12 . 6/20/2015
Can we get a sequel or a spin-off of this chapter , I want more
Geneu chapter 12 . 6/20/2015
Didn't expected Kaguya... Bizarre... Good stuff! :D
Danish78 chapter 12 . 6/20/2015
Wow! A story within a story! Didn't expect the Sakura-Hanabi tagteam nor Kaguya teaming up with Hinata and Karin. Damn! That was twisted and funny as heck at the same time. Nice play up on Sarada being Karin's err Kaguya's... whomever's! LOL worthy chap! Great fun this! Thanks for the read!
glk chapter 11 . 1/29/2015
Could you do a SasuSakuHina lemon? I think that could be fun.
justsomenobody chapter 11 . 1/11/2015
Such a wonderful chapter! It's always great to see SasuHina through your stories. Gotta feel for all three characters (including Hanabi, of course). To finally have the man of your dreams and feel so complete for Hinata, to the Sasuke trying to figure out himself, alongside his remembering Hanabi and having it blend in with Hinata. And then there's Hanabi, who's alone and oblivious to what has happened. Now you have me even more excited (didn't know that could be possible) for the second part of Fading!
Danish78 chapter 11 . 1/11/2015
It's so very nice to read your work, good to see you writing again. I love Fading and anything that adds to it is a treat for me so thanks for this. Feeling a bit torn on this as I am happy that Hinata got a piece of enjoyment for herself after a long time of suffering but at the same time I'm saddened at her betrayal of her sister's trust. Hopefully you can write the sequel to that story sometime soon.

As for this series I hope if you continue this you can add some more chapters from Fading, not necessarily SasuHina/Hanabi but maybe a continuation on that chapter where Tenten propositioned Sasuke to whore himself out to the noblewomen of Naru, maybe to Ino or Karin?

Anyway, thanks for the good read.
justsomenobody chapter 10 . 2/17/2013
Good lord! Tenten you sly dog. I love how you give her such a hardcore attitude for your fics. Adding that to Sasuke's mellow ways makes for a really interesting couple. The lemon goes far and beyond my expectations. Can't ever thank you enough for all the wonderful works you produce.
Geneu chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
Yeah... Love Tenten's boldness :)
Guest chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
awesome
Guest chapter 9 . 12/11/2012
awesome
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