good ending for trouble with clones. nice job

Nice to view twc as all a book. i actually almost forgot about this story and it was nice to see the update :) as for the next chapter, i kno that amber's probably going to meet angel, but wat does josh mean wen he walked into the room and asked when it was gonna start?

Nice to see you updating again... Again, nice chapter and im interested to know wat the next chapter is going to be about. (whether its going to go back to shaundi nd josh and the other saints or continueing with the TWC)

Chapter 5 was just... wow, unexpected. It was a nice way to transition that moment between shaundi nd birk into another chapter. Hope it continues too :)

Chapter 6 was also well written. Nice way to turn the TWC dlc mission into your own words nd extra dialogue.

Keep 'em coming :)

I've just realised the amount of typos in this chapter. Reason being that I stayed up until 1 to do this, so my brain was lacking sense. Later on I'll do corrections later but for now... Cay out!

nice chapters. creative and interesting. :)

I'm Sorry For The Wait Guys. Chapters Five and Six should be ready to upload; I had something up with my Internet. -_-' Talk To You Soon,

-Cay x

Great chapter :) cant wait for more

whoaaaa awkward moment for amber for a second there lol... chapters were amazing and even though chapter 3 was hard for you to write, it still came out awesome!

I Hope You Update Soon! Amazing Work!

love the way u write(ill be looking for updates now).

and

Yess! we need more shaundi/josh :D theres only 1 other story out there with them paired nd it would be awesome to see another. ill probably love the story even more now P

AWESOME! i love chapter 2! :D

Love it! :D

UPDATE SOON! :D

:)

ive never read ur stories but i love it so far :D ill definitely follow up on any new chapters.

I especially love how u mention ALL of the characters (most of the other stories dont include characters like zimos or josh) :).

kkeep it up!

Love it! :D

UPDATE SOON! :D

:)