I thought that was pretty good. If you want to write more frantic that is ur choice but I thought that u did good.

That was.. I don't even know. I read it as an excuse to ask you where you found the picture for the cover of this fic. Or your profile pic, if it's the same. I love that pic of Ciel and Sebastian the dog. Just.. Gah! Where did you find it?

In my imaginary world you would recieve a metal of honor...

LOL!do go on!

Over all, it was incredible! You matched your lyrics in time with the original song(which is very hard to do by the way), all the while "entertaining" the reader.

I personaly think you should do more, ince your already good at it D

that...was...AWESOME! :)