You can not possibly stop here

Ack! I was sure I’d be okay with an incomplete plot if Hermione and Severus were committed to being together, but what a cliffhanger!

Your work is greatly appreciated: it would be terrific if you ever posted more!

I knew this story was incomplete when I started, which always risks disappointment, but your summary was too intriguing to resist! This story has been INCREDIBLE, and I’m extremely relieved that we get to see the reintegration of Hermione’s mind! I’m sad there are only a few chapters left, but I know I’ll enjoy them as much as the many I’ve read before.

Of course The Room of Requirement already exists - this little HP world is sculptored by you for all HP fans to savour and enjoy 3

Please continue this wonderful tale? There are so few *excellent* Hermione X Severus takes out there, and this is one of the absolute best.

for some reason i thought this story was complete when i started reading it... well f*ck me... its been 5 years so i dont think this will do anything, but pls update... pls pls pls. i love this story. if you want a pizza or something maybe i can order it for you? in exchange for the rest of this story? xD. if not, then thank you for the not completed story. its still much much much more enjoyable than most of the storys on ff

I hope you come back to this story at some point. You e come so far and it really is getting closer and closer to the end! I hope you come back but thank you for what has already been given :)

I found this via a Tumblr fic rec. I don't normally read unfinished stories, but I am glad I read this one! Thanks so much!

I really wish there was more to this...

Okay, so a reply to a youtube comment I made in jest advised me not to look up this story, so naturally I had to look it up; and I have to say, you hooked me right in. I just spent the last 4 days binging this story, which is surprising because I was initially daunted by the number of chapters. Now I've reached the end and noticed it doesn't seem to have been updated in over 4 years. I suppose I'll just have to sit and hope you come back to it one day. Now I know how my readers felt when I started focusing on my original stories.

You're style seems pretty good, and your twists definately got me. I didn't see Remus and Harry coming, when they first showed up. The only criticism I can think of is that your paragraphs do seem a little long to me, and you may want to reign in your head-jumping a little. I'm actually working on that myself.

I liked the "parallel storytelling" you were doing, showing one event from two different points of view. I did actually experimant with that in a story I'm writing, over the course of 3 or so chapters. I was also doing the Split Personality thing, though I was going about it in a somewhat unique way. Rather than blacking out, the character sometimes remains concious, seeing (and believing) the other personity as a seperate person (specifically, a protective older sibling.)

As for the impression I got of Remus... I'm not sure. He was serving as an obstacle, though I can't entirely fault him, but he struck me as though he were trying to act as Hermione's father, but he's not. I was waiting for Nina to say something to that effect. He admitted himself that he was in a similar boat; maybe that gave him special insight, or perhaps it made him a hypocrite, I'm not entirely sure. I was expecting Hermione's mother to cause a scene, when she figured out the truth, she was a little more accomidating than I expected.

I think that was all I wanted to say. I've enjoyed this story so far, so I do hope you come back and continue it one day. I'll follow you just in case.

omg. I really hope you're able to continue this, I love the story!

Oh no! After all these twists and developing the characters, how can you just abandon this story?

I really hope you'll get around to finishing this someday :)

I 100% despised this chapter.

I'm not digging this story much anymore. While I understand the reason behind using "nina" now instead of "hermione" it's grossing me out and the fact that there is literally nothing similar about them, just makes it seem like he is just trying to fuck some random self-insert character. I hope she disappears soon because I would like to actually read this fic instead of skimming over it to avoid the heinous creature Hermione's become.