Keep it up this is good

oh my A my friend. That was extremely beautifully written. I was a cross between wanting to cry and vomit and urgh so many feels. Can't wait for the next update!

Oh my, this chapter was quite intense! But I think you captured the moment perfectly! Please update soon!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update this story! i believe this is one of the most well written fic and the way u keep roy and riza IC is just amazingly wonderful!

i just don't understand why a very good fic like this got so little reviews instead of crappy unrealistic royai story is much more popular?

surely i'm gonna fav this!

This was my favorite chapter so far. Not that I'm twisted in that way, the last thing I want is for Riza to get hurt. I understand why it was done, but I hate seeing her in pain. (Reading her in pain...?) But it was the best written chapter in my mind. I can't leave a very good review, since I'm in an unbelievable hurry right now, but you have my word that this is a beauty of a fic. I love it so much and con't wait for chapter thirteen. Okay, that's all I have time for! Bye, now.

-PeaceReaper

Wow, I am really glad you wrote that all out. In all the fan fictions I have read about that part people have skipped it all together. You have awesome skills. :3

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This is one of my favorite Roy-Riza scenes ever and you did a fantastic job writing it out! :D

Ohhh... Riza... she's so strong. I enjoyed this one. With the burial Riza performed and the plead for Roy to burn her back. Also, I'm glad you could update. FF has been disappointing me lately... Sigh. Anyway, keep these updates coming please! Bye, now.

-PeaceReaper

lisen i dont usally post reviews so please update

Oh, I'm so happy you updated! All of the stories I have been following have been so uneventful, I thought I would die. BUT! You updated with yet again, another fantastic one. I like fighting scenes if they're written well. And this one was, that's for sure. This is a great story to get lost into and imagine all the scenes. I'm blabbing now, I should go. Bye-Bye now!

-PeaceReaper

I liked this one too. I'm also intrigued by the type of relationship status the two are in. Anyway, I hope you'll be able to update alright, despite school starting up soon. Great job!

So cute! (:

This is very interesting, I am excited to read more when you get it posted. I love the way it is written and all of the development. Keep up the good work. :3

This is really, really good. Keep writing :)

Action! Loved it! :D Aww, you might not be back till August? Oh well, that's a shame. Anyway, this one, just like the others, was awesome. Fluent, kept us reading, and used a correct amount of detail with overdoing it. So good job!

Also, I enjoy the strategies you point out in your writing. With Roy's orders and the overall game plan of what the soldiers do. It's like envisioning a bonus episode of the anime! Haha!

And I can't wait for some romance to develop! Since it is one of the genres. See ya later! Cant wait for more. As always.

-PeaceReaper