Awesomeness! Absolute awesomeness! I'm a bit loopy from sleep deprivation so this review may sound like I'm drunk!XD ANGSTY AMEBEL FLUFF! MY FAVORITE KIND OF FANFIC!

Ahh Ivan is dead. Now on the story I loved it and that is all I could really say rabout it have a great day :)

I haven't read an AmaBela story for a while, and here you are keeping me glued to the screen for the past thirty minutes.

You have the kind of prose that I like a lot, with much descriptions but still managed to make it flow and feel personal. One thing about this type of writing is that it can get overly descriptive and an action is lost within the words. For instance, I had to read a couple of sentences over again because I didn't understand what they were doing the first time around. It's not exactly a problem per se as it's the style you're writing in, but just keep in mind whether the readers can still follow you at certain points.

Anyhow, I spotted minimum grammatical errors that could easily be fixed, and thought this story was both well-written and entertaining. Bravo, and I'd like to read more from you. :)

First married couple fic I've ever read.. oh gawd _

I really like this, it's very well-written - although I found the beginning to be somewhat slow and catching on was a little hard.. I also got confused about 'his companion, his lover' and I would NEVER have guessed that they were married here. Either that or I'm just a tad slow... heheh.

Drunk!Bela is adorable, and her swear phrases are SO random, I might plagiarize them sometime.. hoho. And this is a completely new take on America's side in this shipping (though I honestly want more D:).

Good job~ Fav'd :D

i like this. this is the first America Belaruse (sp) pairing story that i have read. i like it, this is very well written. i like how you use larger words instead of going really simple because that makes seems more... im not sure how to put it but it makes it seem more intellegent. you use the word slapped a lot, maybe you could find another word to use other then that one cuz it was use like 3 times in the begining.

Well good work with this story it is very good. also try to remember to indent your paragraphs :) have a good day.

Married AmeBela? I FANGIRLED SO DAMN HARD.

Nice story! I love Alfred here! He's really wise . .

FAVED! Write more AmeBela, da?