Great chapter. I like George's talk to his brother.

That was great. I think you captured Kayla and George's thought well.

I may have actually cried a little bit when I read this. I've sometimes wondered how George was coping with Fred's death, and your story is one of the best I've read on the subject. I know I was devestated when Fred died...
I know lots of twins (which is kinda crazy, but I do...), and that is how they act, like two halves of a whole. If one of them lost the other, I can't begin to fathom how they'd feel, they're so close.
Amazing writing, and a great take on the subject.
nerdy

I cried... As I often do reading something about Fred. This is a fantastic way to depict twins (Hailey and Kayla) because that is the exact same way my twin sisters act.

Thank you for uploading, I enjoyed it!

Beautiful writing. It felt so good to read it. Keep up the good work