It put a smile on my face, how the Once-ler and the Lorax interacted. The end doesn't feel like an ending at all, though.

This is one of the greatest Lorax fanfics I've ever read, seriously. It's very well-written and the narration is smooth and easy to read. I especially love how your wrote for the Once-ler, he was so in character and his sarcastic remarks made me chuckle. The only complaint I have is that some of the dialougues were a bit lengthy and repetitive, but other than that, very well done. :) It fit the movie's character very well and had a very realistic and sweet alternate ending. Great job! :D

I love Norma. And the ending is awesome

Is this truly complete and done?
It doesn't feel done.

Aw, this is adorable. I thought that it would have a bad ending (as in, a sad event), but it was very good :)

Ack!why would you end it with that line! This is great, though. I really enjoyed it, but oh that line! 'How bad could it possibly be?'

A great " if only " ending :)

You! You're awesome. Your story made me happy (not nearly as depressing as most Once-ler Fics on here) when I was neutral. Then again, I don't get sad very easily... Whatever, just know that it's amazing.

That was rather cute. I especially like how you wrote the Once-ler. You really did a good job of capturing his character without making him too jerkish or naive.

Aw, I loved your interpretation on how Thneedville came about! :)

I think this is rather cute and a positive take on a children's classic tale from Seuss. I like it, good job

Awww happy endign xD

I just looooov Norma in here and the Once-ler is sooo ammm nayv.. inocent even in his greedy-self.

Love it :D Keep writing awesomenes!

A nice, happy ending for the Once-ler without the guilt of destroying everything first. Good work _

Great ending!

This was a good story. I always hoped that someone would write a story were the Once-ler stopped cutting down trees and stopped destroying the forest but didn't nessarly have to stop production. (and it dosnt end sadly that way, even thought thats how the actual story goes) I like how the Lorax still showed up at 3 every wednesday no matter what he said. and great ending I like that they can be friends and Once-ler got a date with Norma who is wonderfuly odd in your story! all in all great work I hope you write more! D