I'll just look at one more story, and if it's good I'll read it, and then I'll go to bed. And, suddenly it's midnight and I'm leaving a crazy review. Whelp.

Please, PLEASE, continue!

Oh this is getting interesting, fo please continue.

Good one-shot. I really hope you'll write more. I love the idea of John being a Time Lord in disguise. I'm also really curious about how Sherlock will react.

Oh my goodness! I find it a crime that you have yet to update! Please I humbly beg of you, continue with this story!3

I think John would make an excellent Time Lord. Please continue!

Oh my gosh. You are a genius. This is so good!

Both Sherlock and John are in character, and I love how Timothy Latimer was introduced. Also, I really like that John, not Sherlock, is the Time Lord, and that he isn't the Doctor or the Master. That explores the possibility of another unknown Time Lord surviving, which I think is actually quite likely...

ANYWHO... continue this, please! In my opinion, this is too good to leave as a one-shot. I don't know what you could do to add on to it, which might be the reason you stopped writing it, but seeing this story updated would really make my day!

I would really appreciate more, I want to see where this goes! But this is brilliant on its own.

OH SNAP

"... stranded on a planet with a level five civilization and hip-hop." LOL

"John?"

"I CAN SEE ALL THAT WAS, ALL THAT IS, AND ALL THAT WILL BE ... My *head*! Oh, I'd forgot - my planet's gone! Wait - the celery! Back in a bit, have to see a man about a box!"

"...?"

The above conversation would be followed by a seriously outrageous amount of running - Sherlock following John, for once. XD

This whole thing is brilliant! I love it. Kudos! And a banana. (But not an apple: apples are rubbish.)

Quick, to the TARDIS, there are glorious adventures to be had!

This is an awesome start and an interesting beginning. Keep it up and good luck with your writing.

Woohooo! (Nice 5 insert, there, by the by!) Utterly brilliant!

Muy bueno, hay continuación?

good story you should make a sequel :)

Wow.

That was really, really good.

Seriously, really, really good.

You have both of them perfectly- and I love the older veteran- GREAT nod to "Human Nature/Family of Blood" there.

Just-

And you made John instead of Sherlock-

I-

Yeah.

I'm not even able to form a coherent review.

That is how good it is.