me encantoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo espero la conti

I almost forget 3rd comment is that i like how you potray Lucia seems a lot like her mother, beautiful, intelligent *soldier need to be smart in order to survive, rebellious, headstrong at the right time but too smart to hide it like dangerous smart lady like. What i see luciel n lucia is the smartess of all even lucien is actually Lucia's twin

Impressive! We'll be just wait.. The story too awesome not to read even it incomplete wish you'll write again. For that, i still need to magnified and review certain scene that always made my brother glare and even the quiet one need to answer me and asked me to shut the hell up bc that producer script writer things, but still,
watcher need to let out what harness inside the heart.
1 comment: For that excess, ana and lucia i guess from my opinion, the fun and funny happened between Lucia and Exceed interaction because both seems strong but witty at the same times even excess such a douche bag but can't help it still funny to read that heartless brutal douchbag can be so playful with such headstrong and witty Lucia. Even at their fighting scene i can't help to think that Excess is more suited fit for Lucia. Ana more like ignis type to be suit to her. *grinning with sweat on the forehead*
2nd comment ~ i wish if in the future you may completed this story and wish that no interfere from their children how Noctis and Lightning met bc they need to do that all by themselves and the children can only be spectators on the other side. Bc it more fun like that. let them met naturally as enemies who fall for each other.. Or maybe like dissidia NT fight together. * Grin widely

Owhhhh You are born to be best..its your nature

Whoohw

Hi please please update! You're an amazing writer and please don't stop writing! Can't wait for your next updates especially on serenity!

I can't stop crying. This is the best chapter of them all! :*
You've got talent, dear. Keep it up. The way you describe feelings and everything that happens... WOW just WOW!
The 1st chapter freaked me out, but it was good. This one was so sweet!

I love this chapter. It makes me wonder what will happen. I really hope you come back and finish your story

Update please

Okay. Here are my comments regarding each story:
1st: I got kind-of creeped out... But you really are a talented writer to write so much.
2nd: I did play the songs that you said that it would match the story... Then... I also played Soundless Voice and Hajimete Koi Was Shite Kioku (Memory of my first love)... Which made me flood my room in tears while reading. X3
3rd: I hope you continue the story. I wonder what Ana was gonna talk with Light about...

Please continue Family and all your other stories! You've got awesome ideas, I hope you update soon.

I really NEED you to finish the story. I loved it so much! Please finished it. It would complete my world. FOR THE LIGHTIS BABIES

'stop eyeing his mother as if she were a T-bone steak.'

Holy shi- that line had me CRACKING UP. BEST LINE EVER!

Except...I'm never going to look at steak the same way again (pun NOT intended I swear XDD)

Hullo!

I finally got internet! Probably not a big deal to you lol but I'm currently back home now, on a little island that might as well be communist given how bad the connection is (but you didn't hear that from me). And man it feels good to finally be online again, and reading what everyone's been writing-especially about Lightis. Although I didn't get the alert for this even though FFNet says I have you on alert. Better harass the FFNet gods :D nek minnit 'Cam277 is no longer an author' T_T haha

This story was really fun to read, and funny too - good combination. Working life sucks so this was a much needed pick me up. Man poor kids having such horny parents. Should really get those walls looked at huh? hehe I loved the family theme here but man it escalated (ahh kids)

Your muse disappeared on you?
-dons camouflage and starts setting snares-
That should do it lol :D You'll get your muse back, don't worry

Man look at this review, smileys everywhere. You can imagine how much restraint I have to exercise when I send office emails to the team leader lmao.

Music!

Don't Know Why - Norah Jones - the jazzy feel plus the piano makes it feel like I'm watching a montage of the Lightis family going through daily life when I listen to it. Kind of like when you're watching an AMV.

Take care and all the best with school!
-Riley

hello, im tichiharahara... and i fond of your story. ive read this like longtimeago, last year actually. september or so, since being such a painintheass for me, i couldnt access my account so i left. boom! damn long time since ive last read ff here.
long story short, i want to borrow the copyright of this story, to make another version of it. hehehe you see, im a daragon hardcore fans.
thats why i humbly ask for your story this one, to be continued! and also i ask you to letting me make another version of matrimony and your lovely uncompleted story. i really exited for your answers yes or no is welcomed. thank you!

to tell you the honest truth... this.. is.. really AWESOME! LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! infinity LOVE! Eventhough its not completed yet, but when i read, it really made my day, make me feel good, i mean sooooo gooood, i got this awesome feeling ... keep writing kevin, hopefully chaotic in your life will disappear soon take your time but don't lost nie261