Hi! I follow you in Tumblr and I really love your ikarishipping headcanons and this fan fiction. I wish if u write other fanfiction please!?

Omg espeonsweetie I luv ure stories! Hope you can finish scandalous r mayb start sumthin new!

IT'S SHO FLUFFY! (Imitates little girl from Despicable Me :D)
Anyway, that's really sweet :3 I love Paul and Dawn, and I imagine that he would have moments like this with her where he would just say to hell with his hot, manly-man pride and apologize :) I like how you had some internal conflict for him, and how sweet you made him without actually making him sweet. He was being sweet in a Paul-Kinda-Way :D :) Very good :D

Loved this! I think you did a great job. Awesome work!

Loved it :3

i am like a sucker for these types...song...hmmm...what song...i dont know any song that it could be that inspired you...aahhhggg!

aww, thats cute(:

oooh i realy enjoyed that

pride is a pain in the a**

im normally good on geusing the song

was either

please dont leave me by pink

story of us

enchanted

the other side of the door

or

wherever you will go

and lastly please dont let me go by olly murs even though you did say the song wasnt the same naeas tge title lol

overall i thought it was a nice sweet great oneshot 5*

Made my heart clench, I really liked it! Paul was so...oh, just Paul. So thanks!

Aww the end is so cute 3 You portraye their feelings very weel imo, couple fights can be so upsetting /

Good job !

That was so beautiful!