This is really cool... Oh,what I say, is this is REALLY REALLY GREAT! Author,I love you, my respect to you! This was only a test... Oh,Loooord, she IS faithful)))

wow. That reeeeaaaly got me sitting on the edge of my chair. it was amazing! could you do more please? that would be great

Brilliant story. I love Bella.

Cool

That was upsetting and then happy

Oh my gosh! I love your story!

This is fantastic! A brilliant idea and I love the utter heartbreak when she realises what he wants her to do and also the bit where she's about to say she loves him but doesn't. Wonderfully written and I'm so glad it was just a test!

This was so brilliant! I thought she was going to die, the suspense was so... suspenseful, it was just amazing. I was right to think that you and Gamma are the best Bellamort writers on here. I think I ought to read more of your Bellamort :) Great Story

Wow, you really had me going there! I thought it was actually poison! Very good writing; you displayed Bella's loyalty and Wormtail's personality very well. Kudos!

I absolutely loved the way you described Bellatrix's reactions, Wormtail (ughhhhh) and the Dark Lord - especially at the end. It was brilliant ;)

Amazing job! I like very much your story and I'm glad that it was only a test!