THAT WAS TOO EXPLICIT FOR MY VIRGIN EYES

So, in my fairyland place, Korra asks "Will you marry me?" because Korra would be the only one to have the guts Mako that. BUT my common sense tells me she ask "Do you love me?" Curse you common sense, messing up my fantasy.

Great job on these! I was actually hoping someone would make one these because so many emotions can be conveyed by a single sentence .

I've been sort of admiring you from afar on Tumblr for a long time, but I decided that it was probably time to stop sighing over your fic and leave a review on at least one :3

Ayway, ugh, this is fantastic. I love your characterizations of these two so much. I adore your writing style; it's so lovely. I've never really shipped Makorra hardcore, but your fics make me want to.

Thank you so much for writing these!

Is that four worded question "Do you love me?" :D haha this was absolutely, positively, the best Legend of Korra fanfiction I have read yet! I know it's premature, but I ship this couple already as well. Thank you for writing!

Oh wow...this was really good. I loved every word of it 3

HI!

This is really good!

I like all of them! But some are sad, like the ones where Korra just lives on but Mako dies. Or ones where Mako doesn't get to have her. Or the one where Korra's parents die.

I like the happy one's too!

Thanks for making this!

~ Anitoon3

I love this story. I can't help but to keep coming back and rereading it.

Mako and Korra were beautifully in character! That's saying *a lot* because it seems as though many authors are having difficulty with Mako's character. Some write him too much like Zuko with lots of angst. (When, they’re VERY different in terms of character and what they expect from life.) While I've seen others describe him in competition with Bolin for Korra's affection.

Once I read "39. Torn" I think you really captured Mako's character! (Especially from what we saw in episode three.) "Torn" also put into a sentence what I love about MaKorra - there shouldn't be shipping wars because I really do feel like Mako would push Korra towards Bolin if he knew it would make Bolin happy. Mako is self-sacrificing and not expecting much from the world. So HUGE kuddos to you for making that leap when many are still grasping on how to write him.

You had so many wonderful lines in this fic. It was like having a sample of variety of different fics with a beautiful range of emotions.

Although, I am also curious about the four-worded question. (I came up with, "Did you miss me?" and "Do you love me?" but I like the idea of "Took you long enough." With a grin from Mako - but sadly that's not a question. .)

I applaud your work. This was a huge treat to find and read. Keep posting in your spare time and keep working on your talent as an author. :)

Oh my lord these were WONDERFUL. If you don't mind and aren't bored of this sort of thing...

More?

To tell you the truth, I LOVE these. Yours turned out perfectly. :)

Wow, this was incredible. Your writing skill leaves me in awe. And, though I've only seen two episodes, it seems to me that they're all perfectly in character. Each piece felt like an entire story on it's own, and I commend you for that. Well done.

sora

It's hard picking out favorites but I think 30,36,41, and 45 were my personal favorites.

For the last one I came up with "Do you love me?". I'm a romantic at can't help it ;).

Good job!

I love every single one of these. They're just so...perfect. :) Even though we still have little information to go off of, they seem interestingly in-character to me. (That might be because I just love Mako so much already that I don't even care.)

My favorites are 5, 20, 32, and 41.

I'd love to know what the question for 50 is. My mind immediately came up with a handful of lines that are all equally pathetically sweet and adorable.

Wonderful. I can't wait to read more from you!

Erika

Love it!

This is really good stuff!

Buuut I'm really curious about that four word question. The best I can come up with is "I love you, Mako" but that's not even a question HAHA. So what IS the four word question?

Very good!

Seriously, I really enjoyed this. You've conveyed all of your ideas so well with limited space; very talented.

And don't worry about the grammar. I've always thought of grammar as more of guidelines, anyway.

;)