Hermione is acting like a brainless harlot. Just because she wanted “revenge” and she wanted to antagonize Draco. She’s supposed to be intelligent and logical, well in this story, she’s nothing but. She didn’t even investigate nor attempted to research about the weird things happening and she could NOT EVEN connect the dots, she was extremely clueless. It would have been better if she had an inkling of the situation but sadly, she’s as dumb AF.

And Draco was just juvenile and rather dim. He’s supposed to be cunning. Well, all the mess could have been prevented if he told her straight away that she was his mate. Although he has been dropping hints here and there but unfortunately, Hermione is dumb AF.

Hermione is stupid and a big idiot. Just because she wanted “revenge” she would offer herself like some harlot. After being warned about Ron’s plan, she just pretended to be deaf. Hermione is a very intelligent and logical character, and you just murdered her.

Hahahah juvenile.

All the violence and mess could have been prevented if Draco just told Hermione.

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update

Noticed this on AO3, have you written the last chapter? Want to know how it ends:)

I read on a blog somewhere this was a great Hermione and Draco Veela fic so I spent the past few days binge reading! I was not disappointed. Very good! Loved it!

This is such a fantastic story, truly one of the best veela fics that I have read. I love how Draco really had to work for Hermione. I really hope you do eventually post the last chapterit would such a shame to have come this far and not finish it now! Thanks for sharing

I freaking love this story!

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update.

Man I love this fic so much! I hope you continue;) but I also know how stressful life is in general so I applaud you for everything you’ve already done!

Loved this! So many Veela stories have them instantly fall in love. I liked that you made them work for it. So glad I checked the dramione awards and found this great fic. Thanks for reading!

I adored this

nice one! :D I trully enjoy reading it...thank You

I believe, it is one of the best Veela fics ever!
Although I understand where it was coming from, I wanted to hit Hermione with something heavy when she was trying to sleep with Ronyuck! Her stubbornness didn't allow her to see the opportunity of wonderful relationship with Draco. But Draco could have been smarter in his wording saying "I ask you" not "I say". Ah, young mulish boy...
I love your Lucius and Narcissa. I don't like when Lucius is shown as cruel and abusive parent and husband. Yes, he is demanding father and has twisted views but family is everything for him. I enjoyed the side story of the older Malfoys.
I am glad I have foud this story!Maybe one day you will find motivation and time to write the last chapter of this beautiful story love, hope, and second chances.
I wish you good luck in all your endeavours!

Wtf she actually said yes to Ron asking her out... what a fucking moron. I honestly don’t know if I want to keep reading.