really hate the damn mind rape no jutsu you keep doing.

dont really like how hes using mind reading jutsus all the time

must be emotioless. Naruto really

naruto feels little bit too Gary Stu ish

hope naruto has the uzumaki bloodline in this. adamantine sealing chains

little bit too rushed

otherwise interesting

the war in narutos world felt cringy

fuck this shit i am out, don't mind me i ma just gonna pack my stuff 'nd leave fuck this shit i am out

Please continue it was interesting story and also the manyuu hikencho too well there is also the option of rewriting this to correcting facts that is not available when you wrote the fic

such a bad idea, giving chakra out was a cluster fuck. Giving it out to this particular group of people seems that it will encounter similar results.

Wouldn't Tobirama be the one to create the flying thunder god jutsu? I mean we all know Minato made it better and then created different varients which was amazing, but to say he's the one to invent it? Dude his two jutsu he didn't even "make," for example the rasengan was originally used by Asura and I don't even know why they had him use a jutsu that Kishimoto said MINATO created. Then he shows Asura using a rasengan during his fight with Indra like what the hell? I wonder if he did that purposely though, I mean we all know the huge plot holes in the whole Naruto series so I wonder if he did that on purpose or he didn't know until he was all like "fuck I messed up."

way to go awesome story hope for an update soon

I hope you decide to continue this story it is fantastic

Ugh instant god mode naruto... It usually bodes I'll for most fanfics when they do it. That said it was written well enough in the first chapter so maybe ultra god naruto might be fun still.