...damn you Laxus..I totally can imagine that face of your doing that to Cana..poor Cana ahaha..I bet heard news of her searching for you make you happy eh Laxus..tsk2...good job author-nim )

Sweet Laxus... Laxana!

eeeeeeeek that was adorable! awesoeme fic! :) i could totally see Laxus doing that tehe

YES!
Lol. Sorry. I just started reading/heavily supporting Laxus&Cana pairing stories, and yours does them justice!
I loved it!
I have no real criticism for you, i loved it!

Hehehe, smooth Laxus.

awww i love it! i hope you right more luxana.

Laxana fics are the best for me _

Such a nice story,I really like it)

Laxus you bad boy! Very sweet :)

Wow.

For such a short one-shot, I have to say I loved it! The concept was great, and it was kind of adorable. And I'm sooooo glad there's someone else writing Laxana now! I hope this isn't just a one-time thing, because you did pretty well. I like how it was based after the drinking contest with Bacchus and how she had Macao's jacket on (because before I was Laxana and before the timeskip, I was a Macao x Cana person xD).

All in all, I really liked this. I did find a mistake though. In the end, Laxus says he's "week to sexy women" - it just needs to be "weak" instead. It's not a huuuge mistake or anything, I just kind of noticed it.

Anywho. I loved this so, so, so much! Great job :)

Cute :)

I really liked this one! Hope that you make more Laxana fanfics!

oh i loved it! the way you wrote it it felt so natural it could make me believe in this couple :3 they would look great together too .good job