I totally love this! The plot, the characterization, the reactions... they're all just perfect. the writing style is also great. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Really enjoyed this story and the Emily Morgan romance!

Oh My God, this story was so intense! But, I absolutely loved it and I loved the ending! This was by far one of the best stories I've read on this site. Great job!

I can't believe I only found out about this story now! This has to be the best story you have written so far! It had a lot of suspense! Currently I'm reading the works both ways fanfic and its pretty awesome like this one! I can't wait for your update on the works both ways one! ;) oh yeah, and you have to be one of the most gifted writers of fanfics ever!

Love, love, LOVED IT!

Just reading this story for the first time, love it! I think Emily reacted to Castello the only appropriate way she could! I have to admit though, I was expecting her to maybe give him a hug or kiss to acknowledge him and what he did for her, but ultimately she had to stress that she disagreed with what he did for a living. Well done, you did a great job.

Naw! Nice Demily! I loved the whole story! It was cool how everything fit together i the end with castello and doyles men! Wasn't expecting him to turn out to be ems dad!

I love this history

sweet!

I am glad I have finally found the time to catch up and read the rest of this - last 4 chapters have been so intense. In answer to your question I think you did a great job with Emily and Castello - realistic.

Well done

Thanks for writing this jewel and sharing it with us... these days lacks in authors who do have actual storylines in their stories.

Your story had a great storyline and a twisting plot. I really enjoyed reading it.

:( finally it's over. I kinda want their trip out in Brazil to be long, although it's dangerous, but cool, and more romantic somehow ;) but once the secret of real father turned up, and Castello got involved to help them, the case seemed to become easy. You gave us a beautiful ending :) but it felt a little sad knowing it means they'll leave the team. And thank you for letting us see the little girl in frond of Robert Prentiss. And Easter took Emily away every time he showed up, finally he helped to bring her home this time ;) Love your stories, and the way you write their relationship. I'm so sure I'll keep reading all your stories of them, so please don't stop it!

I have to tell you the two little scenes of Demily are so lovely! That made me unconsciously smiled like a girl who is watching her bf's text while I was reading in subway T.T so, short but good ;) thx.

When I read this chp b4, I felt like I hadn't expected Emily to know the truth of her real father as fast. I'd thought it was going to be after the case maybe. Then it would be a big shock when she thought things all ended up well. Then Morgan could manage to help her face it... but when Castello disappeared before they got into the lobby, it felt right:)

And they lived happily every after...

It was a wonderful ending to an exciting story.