Great story and I love the style of writing. Makes me want to read even more of it! :)

I'm not satisfied

i didnt read the story but it was amazing i love it so much keep writing

I really enjoyed the story it's very well written and I could picture everything clearly thank you for sharing it

You used the original authors "devices" too much. To be honest I read this ironically. Even it's your own version, the characters shouldn't be overly shifted.

hi

I...I...uh... I really liked that..

loved it! plz PLZ WRITE MORE OF THIS! :)

It's so erotically sweet, although the "fucking in a classroom" didn't do it for me, kind of ruined the somewhat tender atmosphere you'd created. Apart from that I really did love it.
It seemed very true to their characters, although... Why the heck did you just end it there? :P

love it! continuation please!

Adorable! Yet the moral of the story somehow became- "Don't give your deceased boyfriend's younger sister perfume."

Lol. JK. Thanks for the story!

Why? Why? Why did it end? Awww that was really good! You portrayed both of the characters well (especially Teru!) Heeehhee well done :)

More, more and did i say i wnated?... MORE!

ahh, damn, they didnt go for it. lol.

WHAT! No lemon! Lol I'm think I'm just being a pervert. XD This was amazing though. So well written and in-character and I have no compaints about it whatsoever. Except the lemon thing. Lol. :3

Really, REAAALLY loved the classroom scene. And your imagery! The way you write the scenes makes them come to life! If I get to read more Dengeki Daisy from you, I'd be a happy fangirl. :D

-GT