| Reviews for Shinigami |
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Guest chapter 5 . 7/4 Plz plz plz plz continue it I like it story very much plzzzzzzzz |
thegrison chapter 1 . 3/17 FAILED! The spirit/MIND & physical energies can NOT be used apart. The chakra coils automatically puts them together. You can not change it. They need it to live. Plus do NOT use Bleach in Naruto. They have completely different afterlife. |
Kingkong101 chapter 5 . 12/7/2019 You suck |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27/2019 stupid, stupid, stupid piece of utter crap. Fucking hell, sakura already has the nutjob multiple personality thing covered. Rather than just make naruto more fucking mature and bad ass, you decide he needs a second personality to be able to kill? Weak and retarded. Bad enough your grammar and spelling suck, but your plotline sucks too. |
Monster King chapter 5 . 6/26/2019 Great job please continue |
Nihatclodra chapter 1 . 5/7/2019 I do hope that he thinks to try accessing his physical energy in the same way (meditating, then diving in to the "lake"), it literally wouldn't make sense if he didn't. |
arinst2305 chapter 5 . 4/22/2019 Please next |
PARTHA LAHIRI chapter 5 . 3/26/2019 PLEASE UPDATE NEXT |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/28/2018 We need more |
Pushi19 chapter 1 . 10/1/2017 Update please |
Randoh chapter 1 . 8/26/2017 What are you trying to achieve by suddenly giving him bleach abilities when all of those things can be done with chakra anyway? I really don't see the point to the premise of this story. Also, you just had someone suddenly attack a bandit camp and then he is horribly horrified by people getting raped? Yeah, that's not inconsistent at all /s. |
CoffeeAndWaifu's chapter 5 . 4/3/2017 wow! so amazing! It is an awesome story! I cant wait for the next update! |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/25/2016 please update this seems like a really interesting story and i would love to read more |
Tch chapter 1 . 7/19/2016 Another copycat another day. Anything else? Flying rapists? You added something akin to a rape scene to teach something you may have thought a valuable lesson but do we want to see this? Yes you say? Well for us it's a no we see this everyday so I'm gonna guess your another one of those " oh hey! That's a great idea to give the reader a good lesson! Everyone must love this!" And from there we look at you in depression and in anxiety that we have all lost hope because of one idiot who copied off of something already done a few fuckin hundred times already? Feeling great? No? Well think again we feel wonderful like I can rape a child right now because we all totally need to know this. And before I go I'm calling you out on being a sexist I'm a guy, but I'm not sexist fucking idiot. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2016 Such motivation asshole.. Like we haven't seen this shit before in all of our lifetimes. fuckin job copycat. I'm gone. |