Reviews for Shinigami
Guest chapter 5 . 7/4
Plz plz plz plz continue it I like it story very much plzzzzzzzz
thegrison chapter 1 . 3/17
FAILED! The spirit/MIND & physical energies can NOT be used apart. The chakra coils automatically puts them together. You can not change it. They need it to live. Plus do NOT use Bleach in Naruto. They have completely different afterlife.
Kingkong101 chapter 5 . 12/7/2019
You suck
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27/2019
stupid, stupid, stupid piece of utter crap. Fucking hell, sakura already has the nutjob multiple personality thing covered.

Rather than just make naruto more fucking mature and bad ass, you decide he needs a second personality to be able to kill? Weak and retarded.

Bad enough your grammar and spelling suck, but your plotline sucks too.
Monster King chapter 5 . 6/26/2019
Great job please continue
Nihatclodra chapter 1 . 5/7/2019
I do hope that he thinks to try accessing his physical energy in the same way (meditating, then diving in to the "lake"), it literally wouldn't make sense if he didn't.
arinst2305 chapter 5 . 4/22/2019
Please next
PARTHA LAHIRI chapter 5 . 3/26/2019
PLEASE UPDATE NEXT
Guest chapter 5 . 12/28/2018
We need more
Pushi19 chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
Update please
Randoh chapter 1 . 8/26/2017
What are you trying to achieve by suddenly giving him bleach abilities when all of those things can be done with chakra anyway? I really don't see the point to the premise of this story.

Also, you just had someone suddenly attack a bandit camp and then he is horribly horrified by people getting raped? Yeah, that's not inconsistent at all /s.
CoffeeAndWaifu's chapter 5 . 4/3/2017
wow! so amazing! It is an awesome story! I cant wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/25/2016
please update this seems like a really interesting story and i would love to read more
Tch chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Another copycat another day. Anything else? Flying rapists? You added something akin to a rape scene to teach something you may have thought a valuable lesson but do we want to see this? Yes you say? Well for us it's a no we see this everyday so I'm gonna guess your another one of those " oh hey! That's a great idea to give the reader a good lesson! Everyone must love this!" And from there we look at you in depression and in anxiety that we have all lost hope because of one idiot who copied off of something already done a few fuckin hundred times already? Feeling great? No? Well think again we feel wonderful like I can rape a child right now because we all totally need to know this. And before I go I'm calling you out on being a sexist I'm a guy, but I'm not sexist fucking idiot.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Such motivation asshole.. Like we haven't seen this shit before in all of our lifetimes. fuckin job copycat. I'm gone.
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