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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this story. Would have loved to see how those 7 dinners went. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful story I couldn’t stop reading |
![]() ![]() Enjoyed your story immensely! |
![]() ![]() Hurry and finish Please! |
![]() ![]() That was a great story thank you |
![]() ![]() I love this story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! For the whole chapter, no action, only one person really moved, and no dialogue except one person addressing another by name. HOWEVER, the author's graphically described descriptions gave the reader as clear a picture as if it was actually observed by the reader (i.e., screen, TV, or play) - which completely filled the chapter. My first experience with this author, but it will certainly not be my last. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Some deep talks, some joking around, and some sexiness; a great combination! I really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() Great story, thanks so much! |
![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() Thank You |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really really really liked this fic! good job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahahhahahahah funny! I'm liking a lot this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was so ready for that kiss! And so were they! |