Reviews for Benigno Numine
no account chapter 10 . 4/6
Hi, um, I really liked this story, you can actually write well, which is nice, and the plot is great. Is this the end? Either way, can you continue and write a sequel?
user1o1 chapter 10 . 9/7/2019
I almost cried when I saw how long it's been since you've updated. Please, please, please update...
MakaylaCO chapter 10 . 1/6/2019
Oh my f*cking god I love this story so much!
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 10 . 11/17/2017
One of the better stories on this website, I really hope you continue this. Hope to see you come back in the near future!
Kk chapter 10 . 7/10/2017
I have so much to say about this story. First off, IT WAS SO BEAUTIFALLY WRITTEN! I will go as far as saying that this was the best fanfiction I ever read. You changed Alex's character but you have him something that Anthony Horowitz couldn't give him. Emotion. I really enjoyed and loved that part of the storyeven though Alex would be just a bit more kick-butt than that. AND YOU WERE ABLE TO EXPLAIN THE WHOLE FREAKING UNIVERSE IN WORDS FOR THIS FANFICTION! THAT WAS BEYOND AMAZING and I can't even describe the sensation I felt while reading that. (or maybe that whole sensation part was just me) As much as I enjoyed your story, there are a few things that just irked me. A lot of the characters weren't in character. Annabeth was a lot more giggly and girly. She's supposed to be a natural born leader and warrior and she seemed to be bothered by things that normally wouldn't bother her. And Will'S character was way off but I realize this was before the HoO series. Sabina's also supposed to be a kick butt woman but you changed her the same way you changed Annabeth. She was captured in one of the books with Alex and she was determined on keeping herself together and trying to get out. And also, your vocabulary is amazing. I have no idea what age you are but nonetheless, it's still beautiful. (Wish I came up with a better word than that) One thing I don't get is how Alex got to see the very universe and creation. I mean that's an awfully important thing for a boy who just wants to know who he is to see, even a "son" of Aether. And if Alex was a son of Aether wouldn't he be all pure and the essence of good and all that? And if Aether is light and Day and all good and pure then why did it decide to plant its essence in Alex? Ok I just thought of a possible answer to that while I was typing it. Ok scratch that last one. But all in all, I think you know how much I truly loved and appreciated this. I know you probably gave up on this fanfic (and that was a great note to end on, actually) but if you ever see this and decide to continue it, I was hoping for you to develop a friendship between Nico and Alex. Oh and I also wanted to know what happened with Alex and Percy. The point of a crossover is to have the characters interact (I know you did that beautifully later) but I wanted to see the friendship develop between Alex and Percy. But I guess the fanfiction would have been too long then. WOW I wrote a lot. I really hope you see this someday and CONTINUE! PLEASE CONTINUE! Byyyeee ;)
Kk chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR! It is absolutely amazing! This is pure GENIUS! It was perfect in every way and you should seriously like ACTUALLY consider being an author.
LoveGoodBooks chapter 10 . 10/1/2016
Hi I just wanted to remind you of this awesome story you were writing. There are only 3 complete AR / PJ crossovers I can find n I think if you finish this it would by far be the best. So original I really love it! Please? Thanks for a great read! :)
Guest chapter 10 . 9/17/2016
NONONONONONONONO! DONT YOU DARE END IT LIKE THIS!
LoveGoodBooks chapter 10 . 6/4/2016
Hi! I've really enjoyed this story! It's quiet well written, love the plot, the humour, the twists n turns. :) I just wa not to encourage you to come to n keep 2riting this great story! Please?
Thanks for an awesome read. N I can't wait to hear more about Alex in the underworld, his destiny, n the war. Will he fight along side Percy n the gang? Will he forgive Ian for training hi as a spy? Cheers! :)
Guest chapter 10 . 4/21/2016
Is aether a boy or a girl
Guest chapter 8 . 4/21/2016
Jades is the God of the underworld not death. Thanatos is the god of death
dorfchaosgenie chapter 10 . 1/15/2016
That, my dear, is one perfect piece of awesomeness! Please please update :) it's been too long
Guest chapter 3 . 7/19/2015
Argus is still a monster. He still disintegrates when he dies and returns to tartarus
PERCYJACKSONLOVE chapter 10 . 6/21/2015
Why endddddd nooooooooooooooooo!
Randomness chapter 9 . 6/21/2015
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